Sorry, I have come to this thread a little late, but I do agree that we, as individual parents need to make our voices heard.
It is a pity that it is such a very short timescale to respond in, don't they realise that parents of disabled children tend to be rather busy people, very short of time!!
I haven't even managed to read the whole draft bill yet, but it seems to me that any ambiguities will be exploited by the LAs and the NHS to avoid providing the support and services that our children need and we risk years of expensive legal wrangling and making new case law unless this is clarified properly NOW.
There has to be a duty to for the LA to provide the support in the Statement/EHCP - "best endeavours" is just not good enough and provides far too much "wriggle" room to get out of their obligations.
Mediation - it should be the parents choice who the mediator is (I think that the whole compulsory mediation process is bad idea, and will just delay things at best and result in parents losing out at worst), this from someone who was told by the LA that they "would not negotiate with us" and would see as at Tribunal (for a mainstream placement!)
There must be sanctions on LAs who repeatedly flout the law and continue to use unlawful, blanket polices, it is the only way that they will ever be reigned in.
The existing system did not need fundamental change ( and money wasted on Pathfinder projects) what it needed was an effect mechanism to "police" the behaviour of the LAs, which this new system still fails to provide.