The pictures are all jumbled up and jump back and forth so you see a room and then it pops back up three pictures later. So reorder the pictures so it’s like you are touring the house. Start on ground floor, and go up to top then do basement and garden/courtyard last.
It’s a lot of house to heat and the EPC is average at a low C
Photos are not very good. (Going by title of photo with numbers...titles should be updated to say “reception room 1” “main kitchen” “second kitchen” and not just be numbers.)
Picture 3 (or 2 of 19) shows your small and not very cheerful courtyard garden. Don’t lead with this! This is not a selling point. It’s a can you live with it aspect that is detracting from the value. This should be very last photo. Try and get a better one on a sunny day.
Pictures 4 and 5 swap order. The beautiful window in that reception room is way more attractive than a corner TV.
Picture 6. Right in the center of the photo you have your cheap folding metal chairs upstaging what is a lovely kitchen. This should be replaced with two photos centering the best features of your kitchen.
Picture 7. I’d remove the mismatching chairs and take photo without them if I were you. Delete picture 8.
Pictures 9 and 10 are repeats of 4 and 5, delete.
Picture 11.....retake centering what looks like might be a large luxury bathtub & the window. Right now your picture is of an average shower and toilet, very ho hum.
Picture 12. This child’s room is very mismatched furniture. Can you remove the dresser that is blocking the awesome window feature? Try rearranging the furniture in here so it looks more polished.
picture 13 you have a desk in the second kitchen- remove it. Looks awful and the picture doesn’t show what’s in that kitchen. You can’t even tell if there’s a hob or sink. Also very jarring to go from child’s bedroom to another kitchen...I have no idea now where I am in floorplan. Upstairs? Down stairs? So this is why naming the pictures as to where the room is and what it is is so important.
Picture 14. Nice big bedroom...if master you got it, label the picture. My only comment is by putting things in front of the window it gives impression you have no wall space. It looks cluttered. Try moving away from window even if just for photo. If master, consider doing two photos from different angles so can see all four walls of room.
Picture 15 another massive bedroom! Give that two photos so can see all of it.
Picture 16. Yes, same here. Do two photos so can see whole room. Also that tan mattress/dog bed? on the floor in bottom left corner? Remove it.
Picture 17 delete. It’s front of house again.
Picture 18 & 18. Great room. Just label where it is?
Picture 19 another bedroom! Are we upstairs again or downstairs? Is this the master? Label the picture. Do two as it’s a lovely bedroom.
So it’s a 6 bedroom house and there are only 5 bedrooms shown in pictures...where is #6? Even if is storage and you have to empty it to take a picture of an empty room. Do it. Then put stuff back after photo is taken.
Also floorplan says you have a boot room? Where is photo?
Laundry room too- add photo for that. Your other two bathrooms/en suites- need photos of them too. People need to visualise actually living there.
Picture of staircase from top floor looking down might be a good add as you seem to have a skylight in floorplan.
Any nice views from those windows? Say looking into front garden? If so, add that in too. People like pictures from bedroom windows that show greenery and whether they’d be overlooked/looked into by neighbours or from road traffic or if it’s somewhat private/screen by a tree or hedge.