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Grammar folk, put the apostrophe in the correct place in the following sentance:

33 replies

Northerner · 16/05/2006 16:38

If you combined every member of the teams yearly experience

Where would it go in the word teams? BIG debate here in office chez northerner.

Ta very muchly.

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dinosaure · 16/05/2006 16:39

If there is only one team - then it is team's.

But it would be more elegant to say:"...if you combined every team member's yearly experience"

beansontoast · 16/05/2006 16:39

where's hunker?

beansontoast · 16/05/2006 16:40

sorry dino!..dint mean to sya you were'nt good enough!

NotQuiteCockney · 16/05/2006 16:41

I'm with dinosaure. On both her points. Not clear how else you could punctuate it.

JanH · 16/05/2006 16:42

If you combined the yearly experience of every member of the team.

More elegant and no apostrophe's (joke!)

dinosaure · 16/05/2006 16:42

Ooh I like that JanH!

motherinferior · 16/05/2006 16:43

I would delete 'of the team', and add an apostrophe and S to the end of member.

NotQuiteCockney · 16/05/2006 16:44

Now I'm just bothered by "yearly experience". It's a strange phrase.

I'd be inclined to say something like "The team have a combined experience of X years."

JanH · 16/05/2006 16:44

Why thank you, ma'am.

(I am a sad little pedant who spends many happy minutes rephrasing things for fun!Grin)

JanH · 16/05/2006 16:45

Ohhhh, I thought it meant one year for every member (behave, MI!)

dinosaure · 16/05/2006 16:45

Well, you'd have a field day in my office, a treasure trove of clunky prose (not written by me, I hasten to add).

OldieMum · 16/05/2006 16:45

I wouldn't use 'yearly', because that means 'each year'. I would say, 'if you combined all team members' years of experience', or 'if you combined the years of experience represented by each member of the team'

dinosaure · 16/05/2006 16:46

I wondered about that, OldieMum, but as northerner hadn't asked that question, I didn't answer it...bit of a work to rule type, me.

OldieMum · 16/05/2006 16:46

Notquitecockney's is better, though.

JanH · 16/05/2006 16:46

How about introducing a nice clunky member-years (as in man-days in maths exercises)?

motherinferior · 16/05/2006 16:46

The team has a combined experience of X years, NQC. It's a collective noun. Rant. Rave. Froth.

motherinferior · 16/05/2006 16:47

I like the idea of member-years.

NotQuiteCockney · 16/05/2006 16:47

Well, if you're trying to emphasize the members of the team, mi, you can use have. But yeah, has is better.

motherinferior · 16/05/2006 16:49

I am quite sure the members are adequate without further emphasis, dearie.

dinosaure · 16/05/2006 16:49

Fnar fnar.

NotQuiteCockney · 16/05/2006 16:50

:-P

Must go back to having grammar debates about whether "I ain't got no McDonalds is valid" ... much easier to bait people in those ...

nannyme · 16/05/2006 16:55

teams' or team's (?) Blushand sentence btw!

NotQuiteCockney · 16/05/2006 17:29

It couldn't be teams', as dinosaure says, there is only one team.

nannyme · 16/05/2006 23:24

Oh okay I missed the bit that clarified whether it was teams plural!

thewomanwhothoughtshewasahat · 17/05/2006 00:11

what happens if you do combine said experience? just wondering. Also it might effect the feasibility of NCQ's otherwise perfect solution. Although it is very feasible it can broken into 2 sentences. (why have one when you can chop them into two?). The team has a combined experience of x years. This is .../represents...