sashh's comments are bizarre. Why on earth would you write "twenty-seven" rather than 27? In most British newspapers, for example, house style is to write numbers one to nine out in full, but numbers 10 and above as numerals. And what's wrong with using contractions? Even in formal writing, it's usually fine to write "it's" rather than "it is" or even "I'm" rather than "I am". I thought the post from the GCSE student was well written, particularly compared to a lot of the stuff that appears on this forum.
I stated that the student would not pass 'O' Level English and writing things like '27' would lose you marks.
I knew my own post would be riddles with errors / typos, as I wrote it I thought; "someone will pick me up on this".
Contractions are not appropriate for formal writing. The first sentence from the GCSE student did not make sense, how can that be well written?
if o-level English was so obsessed with commas that they were seen as more important than content and other factors, then I don't see why they called it English and not Punctuation.
English Language 'O' Level was not concerned with content. It was concerned with punctuation, grammar, spelling, vocabulary, the ability to use paragraphs, etc. etc.
Surely this is exactly the context where informal language (e.g. the dreaded contractions) should be used?
You are completely right. I made a comment that you would not pass an 'O' Level. It was a flippant comment made from the language used in your first post. I was then asked why I said that, and that is why I took your post to pieces.
It was not malicious, it was to illustrate a point. For all I know your English, used for academic purposes, is perfect. But as a teacher in FE, I find many students cannot write in a formal style. Some use text speak, many are unable to write 'can not' instead of 'can't' and they all seem to use '&' instead of 'and'.
It is a common comment from teachers / lecturers in FE and HE that they have to teach English along side the main subject. English punctuation and grammar are not usually marked but sometimes it is difficult to give marks because I don't understand what has been written. I do want to give as many marks as possible. Some of my feedback will read, "Your answer to questinon P1 was not correct but would have been for for D2, therefore I have given you D2 mark".
P=pass
M=merit
D=distinction
The numerals indicate the particular criteria.
So have a go at me.