Sashh, a warning -- I am about to be cruel and pedantic.
I teach teenagers and I have to teach them basic English along side my actuall subjects. So taking GCSEstudent's post:
'Alongside' is normally written as one word, not two.
'Actual' is spelled with one L.
I think you should have used a comma after 'so', because it indicates a logical conclusion or a summary of your thoughts arising from the previous sentence.
^Sorry for gate crashing but I found this when I was reading about the proposed change.
What is the subject of the above sentence? Why is there no comma after 'crashing'?^
If you can't find the subject there, you shouldn't be teaching English.
The phrase, 'the above sentence', sounds a wee bit dodgy to my ear.
OK this is an informal context so I will allow the contractions with apostrophes.
Where is the comma after 'OK'?
Is 'OK' a word?
Shouldn't there be a comma before 'so'?
Again as it as informal writing I won't pick up the '27' instead of twenty seven
You probably should have used a comma after 'Again'.
You should have proofread -- you typed 'as' where you meant 'is'.
You probably should have used a comma after 'writing'.
You missused a personal pronoun. Your first sentence both does not make sense, and appears to have no subject.
'Misused' is spelled with one S. It should be 'misused'.
Your second sentence should read:
'Your first sentence neither makes sense nor does it appear to have a subject', or alternatively, 'Your first sentence does not make sense, and it appears to have no subject.' Simple is often best.
I did not say anyone was or is thick, I said you would not have passed 'O' Level English, and that is based on this single post, riddled with errors.
There is one comma too many here -- you should have put a full stop after 'thick', and started a new sentence with the next word. Alternatively, you could have used a colon after 'thick'. I prefer the full stop.
I hope you do well in your exams. I really do not want to put you down or devalue your hard work. I am genuinely sad that you do not use standard English conventions, and rightly, or wrongly, I have assumed this is because you don't know how.
Goodness gracious, you do love your commas, don't you? If only you knew where to use them...