@FancyFanny this is a common problem for people on one year courses of any kind. However - I'd be surprised if she were really expected to focus on the foundation course itself. I'm currently mentoring a year 13 personal statement and referring to general advice e.g.: 'As a guide, spend around 60% of the space talking about your course, why you want to do it and how you’re suited to it, 30% on your work experience and any other activities that are relevant to your subject and 10% on your career aspirations.'
I've asked my st to make notes on:
- What do you want to study?
- Why do you want to study it?
- What is there about you that shows you’re suited to studying this subject at university? Think about your personality, as well as your experiences.
- What are your other interests and skills?
And use this checklist for the statement contents:
- Your interest in the course. Why do you want to spend three years studying this subject at university?
- What have you done outside school or college that demonstrates this interest? Think about things like fairs/exhibitions, public lectures or voluntary work that is relevant to your subject.
- Relevant work experience (essential for the likes of medicine, not required for non-vocational courses such as English)
- Skills and qualities required for that career if appropriate
- Interest in your current studies – what particular topics have made an impression on you?
- Any other interests/hobbies/experiences you wish to mention that are relevant either to the subject or 'going to uni'. Don't just list your hobbies, you need to be very selective and state clearly what difference doing these things has made to you.
General advice is not to talk about your qualifications as this will be in your reference. SO the focus is on st interests and motivation in the FUTURE course rather than current IFYSWM. It's not usually relevant to talk about the current course really - only as it related to your own particular interests and motivations. So in that sense it shouldn't matter - but don't be negative that won't help.
Hope that helps.