I don't think you've made the point you think you have.
You've given a recommendation on impacts of VAT from the point of view of a private school (you seem to have particularly targetted it at a high status one, which might want to expand its international offering).
So what? It's surely pretty obvious that my interest is that of a) a parent and b) a tax payer.
That doesn't mean that analysis doesn't work: just that you didn't consider the right question. Of course it can be applied to the impacts on children.
Where did you do your MBA? Have you ever used it, either in a strategic role in a company or else in a management consultancy?
I'm genuinely a bit puzzled.