What do you think to this plot? (brief)

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Jist of it is that main character was a bully at school to one girl inparticular.

She becomes an adult, has kids of her own, feels guilty about her bullying behaviour and searches for the girl she bullied on facebook. Finds her, realises she's led a pretty crap adult life and makes it her mission to help her achieve more.

Things go ok for a while but the whole thing brings back memories that the bullied girl had actually surpressed and whilst the main character focusses on helping her build some amazing life, the bullied girl is actually plotting revenge.

Very, Very early stages yet but I'm thinking it will involve adultery, theft, humiliation etc etc as well as a bit of light comedy?

Would you give it a go?

Firstly, it is not strictly correct to end a sentence on a preposition. 'For' is a preposition.

Secondly that should read 'hopes' and not 'hope.'

Finally, I think you must have read or even studied English and American literature at school.

What on earth are you talking about?

If you were picking at my posts, I'd suggest you read the ones where I say (1) I'm not aspiring to be a writer, (2) I've never said my English is perfect, especially since (3) I am not a native speaker of English.

Oooh, I'm so ashamed that I missed an "s" at the end of a word in one of the two foreign languages I am rather impressively fluent in

Fine. I was being facetious. But it is unpleasant to constantly attempt to spoil the dreams of a young writer - then come back and 'kick her' again. My post was petty but yours are bordering on being cruel. To pick pick pick is odd.

The brave follow their dreams. It is up to professionals to decide if a person has the potential to be a writer. I am a published writer and I know exactly how difficult it is in the publishing world. Complete perfection is not expected. There are editors who can shape up any weaknesses, who can iron out dialect issues.

This is boring. Back to writing. I do hope OP that you are writing and submitting. It is an exciting field and mixing with other writers can be very inspirational.

I have not come back to this thread to taunt OP but to answer replies, most recently from Rosie who resurrected the thread from a two week hiatus with a post directed personally at me.