One of the major issues is that I can not see how these reforms begin to stop the can't work, won't work mindset from ever developing. Once someone has developed this mindset, it takes so much more effort to bring them back to a can do mindset.
Tackle poor parenting, poorly disciplined children, reform the secondary curriculum and it bring it up to the needs of a 21st child, make the school day longer for secondary children to accommodate it if necessary, there is no reason why secondary children are finishing school at 2.30pm. Bring back drama, music, art, coding, dressmaking, hair, make up, beauty etc to engage children.
Start talking to children about careers/well being from Year 6, let them know what is out there and more importantly, what they need (both qualifications and softer skills) to actually get into the career of their choice. A young person should not get to the end of Year 11 and not know what their talents and skills are and how they can use them to become a self sufficient adult and what makes them happy.
There also needs to be changes regarding SEN funding in schools either you up the funding and give the increasing numbers of children the support they need in mainstream schools or you re-open dedicated special schools in order to give young people the help and support they need to be able to function independently as adults.
And finally we need to be brutally honest with our young boys and let them know what life is like after they receive a criminal record. It is not like America where after 3 offences you are sent away for a long time, with a roof over your head and 3 meals a day. This is the UK, most likely you will released after 3-8 years (dependent on crime) with a criminal record that you need to declare on every job application. Just over 1 in 4 people with a criminal conviction find work and although I have no figures, I can guarantee you that they are not doing jobs they really want to do which also have good career progression.
Nice as these reforms look on paper, if the Government really wants to increase employment they have to start asking far more difficult questions and more importantly tackled the root of the barriers identified. Anything else is just lip service and helps no one.