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I write excellent formal letters/emails that get attention - what job could I do?

102 replies

Olete32 · 04/06/2024 20:20

I know it's a weird ask, but I'm thinking of all my strengths as I'm desperately trying to pivot.

I write really articulate, attention-grabbing emails/letters. As a result, I've secured significant amount of compensation for people, had institutions change their policies, and secured press coverage for events. I'm articulate, pithy and not afraid of confrontation.

I've mostly written letters/emails on behalf of friends and family. I'm wondering if there is a job that could utilise this quality?

Any thoughts?

OP posts:
Olete32 · 04/06/2024 21:34

DexaVooveQhodu · 04/06/2024 21:01

Thank you!

OP posts:
iamreallyabee · 04/06/2024 21:37

What is an Oxford comma ?

BobbyBiscuits · 04/06/2024 21:38

Advice and guidance, you can do a qualification in it. Then you can do CAB and at colleges or government bodies, charities etc?
You can also set up some templates you can share with people. Bear in mind a lot of people are vulnerable and lacking in finance so the pay in this type sector is pretty low.
Hoping with new government they'll put more money back into this type thing.

Olete32 · 04/06/2024 21:40

iamreallyabee · 04/06/2024 21:37

What is an Oxford comma ?

"The Oxford (or serial) comma is the final comma in a list of things. Please bring me a pencil, eraser, and notebook."

OP posts:
Crikeyalmighty · 04/06/2024 21:41

@Olete32 - I hear you, as it's something I am good at too - I also work in the arts in PR but have lots of other aspects to deal with, as it's our business but I do especially love writing , particularly if it's to help people out - Love writing a good snotty email too - lol!!

iamreallyabee · 04/06/2024 21:42

Olete32 · 04/06/2024 21:40

"The Oxford (or serial) comma is the final comma in a list of things. Please bring me a pencil, eraser, and notebook."

Were they saying you were right or wrong to use it a third time ? And do you agree ? I'm sorry I just need to know things like this

Olete32 · 04/06/2024 21:46

iamreallyabee · 04/06/2024 21:42

Were they saying you were right or wrong to use it a third time ? And do you agree ? I'm sorry I just need to know things like this

Honestly, I haven't looked back through my posts. I don't know.

OP posts:
Olete32 · 04/06/2024 21:47

Crikeyalmighty · 04/06/2024 21:41

@Olete32 - I hear you, as it's something I am good at too - I also work in the arts in PR but have lots of other aspects to deal with, as it's our business but I do especially love writing , particularly if it's to help people out - Love writing a good snotty email too - lol!!

🙌I'm with you! Absolutely love firing off a snotty email (if it's called for)!

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Abitlosttoday · 04/06/2024 21:49

Namedispute · 04/06/2024 20:20

Unfortunately, ChatGPT does that too. So maybe someone who reviews those?

It doesn't, yet. It may do soon. I'm a copywriter and ChatGPT is very limited in its helpfulness at the moment. It writes and what it writes appears to be articulate, until you realise it does not quite make sense.

ASimpleLampoon · 04/06/2024 21:52

Advocacy. SEND for example?

fedupwithbeingcold · 04/06/2024 21:56

Bid /RFP writer. In my company there's a whole team handling bid management

Jenepeuxpasdiscuteravecdesstupides · 05/06/2024 06:20

Olete32 · 04/06/2024 21:33

🙄

Why the eye roll? You've contradicted yourself

Jenepeuxpasdiscuteravecdesstupides · 05/06/2024 06:27

Olete32 · 04/06/2024 21:40

"The Oxford (or serial) comma is the final comma in a list of things. Please bring me a pencil, eraser, and notebook."

No, it is not. It is not always required at the end of a list.
To give the Oxford comma its technical definition, it is a comma used before the final conjunction in a list of three or more items. When you’re writing a list, you naturally include commas to separate each item, but an Oxford comma is when you also put a comma before the “and [Final Item]”. For example:
Without Oxford comma: “Her favourite foods were chocolate, marshmallows, cake and chicken.”
With Oxford comma: “Her favourite foods were chocolate, marshmallows, cake, and chicken.”
The Oxford comma is also used in exactly the same way in lists in which the conjunction is the word “or” or “nor”
Also, provides clarification - for example,
I like indian, mexican, chinese, and fish and chips keeps 'fish and chips' as an item. If no oxford comma, it makes a list
I like indian, mexican, chinese, fish and chips

Jenepeuxpasdiscuteravecdesstupides · 05/06/2024 06:30

Olete32 · 04/06/2024 21:40

"The Oxford (or serial) comma is the final comma in a list of things. Please bring me a pencil, eraser, and notebook."

Not in a list of only 3

Jenepeuxpasdiscuteravecdesstupides · 05/06/2024 06:32

iamreallyabee · 04/06/2024 21:42

Were they saying you were right or wrong to use it a third time ? And do you agree ? I'm sorry I just need to know things like this

It was wrong ass only a list of 3. See also earlier post as to when an Oxford comma is used

Jenepeuxpasdiscuteravecdesstupides · 05/06/2024 06:32

iamreallyabee · 04/06/2024 21:37

What is an Oxford comma ?

See my post this am!

Lotscanchange · 05/06/2024 06:42

Jenepeuxpasdiscuteravecdesstupides · 05/06/2024 06:27

No, it is not. It is not always required at the end of a list.
To give the Oxford comma its technical definition, it is a comma used before the final conjunction in a list of three or more items. When you’re writing a list, you naturally include commas to separate each item, but an Oxford comma is when you also put a comma before the “and [Final Item]”. For example:
Without Oxford comma: “Her favourite foods were chocolate, marshmallows, cake and chicken.”
With Oxford comma: “Her favourite foods were chocolate, marshmallows, cake, and chicken.”
The Oxford comma is also used in exactly the same way in lists in which the conjunction is the word “or” or “nor”
Also, provides clarification - for example,
I like indian, mexican, chinese, and fish and chips keeps 'fish and chips' as an item. If no oxford comma, it makes a list
I like indian, mexican, chinese, fish and chips

You can use an Oxford comma in a list of 3 - the rule is 3 or more. Also, the OP didn’t say you had to use it - she was explaining when it could be used.

Why are you taking her to task over this? I can’t imagine she’s proofing her posts like she would a piece of writing. It seems a bit pedantic and unfair.

LakesideInn · 05/06/2024 06:43

Jenepeuxpasdiscuteravecdesstupides · 05/06/2024 06:32

It was wrong ass only a list of 3. See also earlier post as to when an Oxford comma is used

And you’ve got a typo in your post @Jenepeuxpasdiscuteravecdesstupides . Way to derail and undermine an interesting thread!

@Olete32 thanks for this thread, I’m in a similar place to you (adjacent skills but not looking for quite the same as you and not yet ready to move) and this has been a useful read with some great suggestions from positive and engaged posters. I like the way you asked for more information, really politely and persuasively, and people have been happy to help! Shows that what you do works!

Jenepeuxpasdiscuteravecdesstupides · 05/06/2024 06:46

Lotscanchange · 05/06/2024 06:42

You can use an Oxford comma in a list of 3 - the rule is 3 or more. Also, the OP didn’t say you had to use it - she was explaining when it could be used.

Why are you taking her to task over this? I can’t imagine she’s proofing her posts like she would a piece of writing. It seems a bit pedantic and unfair.

Oh, I'm so sorry. I didn't realise that taking someone to task was not allowed. Or indeed, raising an anomoly regarding a post
I actualky pointed out when to use it, the OP only mentioned use in a list, when it also has other uses

Jenepeuxpasdiscuteravecdesstupides · 05/06/2024 06:47

LakesideInn · 05/06/2024 06:43

And you’ve got a typo in your post @Jenepeuxpasdiscuteravecdesstupides . Way to derail and undermine an interesting thread!

@Olete32 thanks for this thread, I’m in a similar place to you (adjacent skills but not looking for quite the same as you and not yet ready to move) and this has been a useful read with some great suggestions from positive and engaged posters. I like the way you asked for more information, really politely and persuasively, and people have been happy to help! Shows that what you do works!

But I haven't held myself to be an excellent writer, so...

ASighMadeOfStone · 05/06/2024 06:47

iamreallyabee · 04/06/2024 21:42

Were they saying you were right or wrong to use it a third time ? And do you agree ? I'm sorry I just need to know things like this

The OP used the Oxford comma perfectly correctly.

It's a stylistic choice in British English, and though it's generally used to add clarity in a list, it's not a SPaG "rule" that it has to be used.

@Jenepeuxpasdiscuteravecdesstupides Very infra dig on Mumsnet to post on a thread only to correct someone's English. Quite funny when you turn out to be wrong yourself though.

Lotscanchange · 05/06/2024 06:48

Jenepeuxpasdiscuteravecdesstupides · 05/06/2024 06:46

Oh, I'm so sorry. I didn't realise that taking someone to task was not allowed. Or indeed, raising an anomoly regarding a post
I actualky pointed out when to use it, the OP only mentioned use in a list, when it also has other uses

Ok, whatever. You clearly need to point these things out, despite your own spelling errors and grammatical failings. Have a lovely day! Tilt your face to the sun!

LongSinceGotUpAndGone · 05/06/2024 06:48

It's the law of the internet - "muphry's law" to give it its technical name 😁- that if you mention your high standards of spelling and grammar online, your post must include a mistake.

ASighMadeOfStone · 05/06/2024 06:50

LongSinceGotUpAndGone · 05/06/2024 06:48

It's the law of the internet - "muphry's law" to give it its technical name 😁- that if you mention your high standards of spelling and grammar online, your post must include a mistake.

And it's so very satisfying 😂

ASighMadeOfStone · 05/06/2024 06:51

@Olete32 thank you for the thread, btw, it's very interesting. Good luck!