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First person narrative

27 replies

DwangelaForever · 20/01/2018 12:35

I'm sorry but I hate it.

I've been trying to read a book for about a week and I can't get into it because it's written in first person narrative.

I'm trying to persevere as I got it as an ARC to review but I just can't get past it Sad

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Pickleypickles · 20/01/2018 12:42

Im not a fan of first person narratives either but i have read some because the story itself was good. Maybe the book is actually a bit shit and thats why you cant get past it?

CuriousaboutSamphire · 20/01/2018 12:47

What's the book... it could just be a shit read!

They aren't all bad... Twighlight and The Hunger Games did quite well Smile

Trills · 20/01/2018 12:49

If you hate it then at least it's something that you can tell from the very first page, so you can choose not to buy the book.

MyBrilliantDisguise · 20/01/2018 12:50

I love the first person narrator! I feel I can really get inside their head.

DwangelaForever · 20/01/2018 12:57

It's a book coming out in Feb called The Pact by SE Lynes and I absolutely love the concept but I can't get over the narrative!

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GlitterUnicornsAndAllThatJazz · 20/01/2018 12:59

I prefer first person!

Third person reminds me I'm reading a book.

CuriousaboutSamphire · 20/01/2018 12:59

I'd agree. One of my favourite reads is Interview with a Vampire... Louis as narrator allows all sorts of clever observations that would be far too laboured otherwise.

CuriousaboutSamphire · 20/01/2018 13:01

Sorry, I misunderstood the ARC reference.

That has to be a pain, get a free book and not like it yet still have to read it Sad

Trills · 20/01/2018 13:46

Do you HAVE to read it? Or have you just been offered the opportunity to read it?

Trills · 20/01/2018 13:47

Send it to me, I'll read it and give you some comments :)

CaoNiMa · 20/01/2018 14:12

It's the only type I can stand to read (or write, for that matter). Third person doesn't situate you convincingly enough within the narrative. Second person shouldn't even be attempted!

Trills · 20/01/2018 14:59

I'll agree that second person only works in a choose your own adventure book.

First or third can both be good in different stories.

pandarific · 20/01/2018 15:32

Twilight?! Twilight wasn't bad?

It was prettymuch universally agreed to be a steaming pile of badly written, poorly plotted, deeply cliched donkey manure as far as I recall.

CuriousaboutSamphire · 20/01/2018 15:39

Twilight?! Twilight wasn't bad? I didn't say it was good... just that, like The Hunger Games, it did well.

Trills · 20/01/2018 15:42

Twilight is very engaging.

ScreamingValenta · 20/01/2018 15:45

I once read a quote (can't remember whose) that 'only geniuses or idiots write in the first person'.

I don't agree with that - any narrative style is fine as long as the novel is well-written.

TrickyD · 20/01/2018 16:15

I don't mind the first person narrative but dislike books written in the preset tense.

TrickyD · 20/01/2018 16:18

It helps if the writers can spell "present" unlike me. Blush

BigBaboonBum · 20/01/2018 16:19

50 shades was first person and that was amazing Smile

Lolololol joke! Back to reality, I love first person but I find it misses too much in general... unless it’s a jump around first person (where it’s different people). I like those, different view points of the same story

CuriousaboutSamphire · 20/01/2018 16:38

Tricky Smile

I was trying to construct a sentence in the preset tense

  • knowing the number 92 bus was going to swerve to miss a dog I stepped aside, raised my hat to the gentleman who was about to walk around the corner and slid into the last seat available in my favourite coffee shop!
Trills · 20/01/2018 16:42

Oh yes present tense can be very annoying.

TrickyD · 20/01/2018 18:13

Curious, that ranks with those strange writings which completely avoid using the letter 'e' or that backwards "Time's Arrow" book by Martin Amis.

You are a literary pioneer.

Spangles1963 · 20/01/2018 18:14

It doesn't really bother me what person narrative a book is written in tbh,although if pushed I'd probably say that I actually prefer it written in the first person. On the other hand,my DD actively dislikes books written in the first person. And I agree with what a PP said about books written in the present tense. I also find them a rather annoying.

Rejoiner · 20/01/2018 18:43

I can't read books written in the 1st person at all, I just cab;t get into them. In my 'youth' or pre-kids I was an avid reader and spent hours perusing WH Smiths checking if books were suitable or hanging out in the library.

Now I have taken up reading again it's easy with the 'look inside' kindle feature

echt · 20/01/2018 20:00

Try "Buffalo Soldiers" by Robert O'Connor, written in the second person, present tense, but plainly from the point of view of a single narrator.

It's exhausting.

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