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Could anyone do a quick read through of this statement for a job application, I really need this job!!! Part of very long council application form

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littleducks · 05/03/2010 16:05

I have worked in 5 years almost, mainly due to two dcs, i have found a great part time position at local library that I really really want.

The application form is really long, but this is the final part where i have to go thtrough the person demonstrate why i want the jpob and why I would be good at it.

Could anyone proof read it for me, I have to email it off before 5pm.

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littleducks · 05/03/2010 16:09

Last sentence should end at improved then:

I would like to become a member of the team of library staff and be able to deliver customer service to help others to enjoy their experience of the library as much as I have.

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littleducks · 05/03/2010 16:17

PLEASE!!!!!

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Francagoestohollywood · 05/03/2010 16:22

Good luck with the job LD, bump for you!

bluemonkey123 · 05/03/2010 16:24

hey littleducks, looks good to me apart from last sentance, should stay as neutral as the rest of your statement by reading:

The Health Module of my access course also covered issues of reflective practice which helps analyse professional interactions and consider how to improve future personal performance.

Otherwise, quite impressive all round experience - I'd hire you
Good Luck

Hassled · 05/03/2010 16:25

It reads well (apart from the missing I at the start) but without seeing the job/person spec it's hard to tell - I think what you should do is try to marry up what you've written quite specifically with what they've said they want.

So go through the list of essential/desired requirements that they should have sent you and make sure you've covered each one in your statement.

I would change the second sentence to "I would enjoy working (or value the opportunity to work?) in an environment in which I feel at home"
Good luck.

is1 · 05/03/2010 16:25

Saftey =safety

hf128219 · 05/03/2010 16:25

I have a longstanding love of books and reading, which has seen me as a regular library visitor throughout my life. I am well organised, able to follow directions and prioritise tasks. Recently I have been working as a virtual administration assistant for a small internet firm. As this role was home based I had to manage my time well in able to complete the work required within set time frames. My main duties were to create accurate record of customer order queries and complaints. The nature of the role and, indeed the business, meant that I was able to demonstrate and improve my IT skills.

I am familiar with Windows, Microsoft Office and have experience of using a number of in-house computer systems. As part of my Access course at Thames Valley University this year, I have also completed a module incorporating ICT skills which was assessed at 6 OCN credits at Level 2.

Throughout my working life and recently as a volunteer organiser at a Mother and Toddler group I have had to show an awareness of Health and Safety issues and practices. I was also awarded a CIEH Health and Safety in the Workplace certificate after completing a short course demonstrating the importance of Health and Saftey guidelines and correct procedures.

My experience of front line customer care was developed mainly from work as a sales assistant and within Wexham Park Hospital where I had to communicate clearly and effectively with customers, dealing with customer complaints in a sympathetic and professional manner. My experience working as a Mystery Shopper has also highlighted the skills required when dealing with customers.

Whilst working within a retail environment I was responsible for cash handling, completing financial sheets and PDQ printouts totalling daily sales. I am confident in my numeracy skills and have been asked to assume the role of treasurer for a pre-school.

As a commitee member of a pre-school I have been made aware of the importance of a positive attitude to diversity. With the Early Years Foundation Stage curriculum recently being implemented I have had a responsibility for these issues and have also demonstrated a positive attitude to embracing change, as well as an ability to consider alternative ideas and methods.

The Health Module of my access course has also covered issues of reflective practice which helps to analyse professional interactions and consider how your personal performance could be improved in future. I have also learnt

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