Thank you both for taking the time to respond.
I had a bit of a turnaround over the weekend and I found a site called "duct tape marketing" or something like that and took a pen and paper and wrote down all the advice/tips which I feel apply to me. I've implemented some of them - and some of them are things which I'm not quite ready to do "yet", but are in my calendar for 2/3/4 etc. months time.
I was struggling with my copy too, but my creative brain came in to action a bit and it's come together a bit more. I think I was sounding a bit too formal iyswim, when I need to be personal because I am the service.
I have turned my attention away from Twitter, albeit perhaps temporarily, because I was attracting as you say watersign, the "wrong" customer. I will probably persue that avenue again when I've identified how to appeal to my customer. Not even sure they'd be looking in that direction.
I need to network and thankfully have someone (fellow service provider) who's very good at this so I'm going to try and convince her to come along with me one day so I can see how she shmoozes with style. I'm thinking of going to the business show at Olympia in November I think it is - because I need to meet the "right" sort of client, and I think somewhere like that will be ideal.
I feel a lot more confident in my product now and I asked my friends to complete an anonymous survey about my top 3 qualities - and although they've given me the answers I kind of expected, having them re-iterate who/what I am has lent itself again to more fluid & personal copy and it's also helped cement another stream I was interested in, in fact more interested in - and actually I think attracting clients to this will be easier (I hope!).
I need a total website re-design because the thing I've got now is clunky & doesn't flow well. But I've identified the wordpress template I want and will set it up later in the week with my sparkling new copy.
I've also re-worked my SEO to try and be a little more exacting with whom I'm attracting rather than taking a scattergun approach.
I figured out what I'm going to do in the way of content (free e-book) and the upsell options with this.
So right now I'm feeling a lot more confident. :)