Where I can ask some feedback about my site?

[maruxz]

I wonder where I can ask to review my website in MumsNet? I have launched it but I need some feedback from the customers directly (our customers are mothers with 5-12 years old children).

You can pay for a posting in media/business requests or small business (look under topics)

Or there are a number of sites that we send out your link to people who will do a usability review for you.

Or you can use a pop-up questionnaire to get responses (eg via surveymonkey) although they will be biased.

Or you can employ me to do a usability review for you

or just post its name and don your hard hat !

I want to make it properly not to get banned. :)

actually it is one page of a child birthday party. I am not native English speaker, so I had issues with the language, but now it seems everything correct.

Can you please take a look at this page (not entire site) - go-crazy.co.uk/spy-birthday-party and tell what you think and would you buy from this page. Any feedback (especially hard critics) is much appreciated.

You need a better URL than that. What's the whole thing?

www.go-crazy.co.uk/
OP
Sorry but that 'combination' of themes is an UTTER turn off to me.

I would have to agree with TalkingPeace.

I agree - I wouldn't dream of clicking on 'children's birthday parties' after seeing the Hen Party stuff on the same page.

Not sure that the value is so wonderful - (I had a party for my 6yo last year, 20 children, 2 people came to help and it was less than the price for one entertainer on yours) or that you should really be putting all the information about why you're charging what you are charging either - better to say that you're having a sale or something....

OP
there is also TOO MUCH INFORMATION on your web site
for the investigative minded like myself, I would ask
how many events have you done in the UK since you relocated from Lithuania?
etc etc

and not enough information about the things that matter like your insurances and risk assessments

Hummm, interesting.

I agree that combining hen parties and children's parties is very odd - I'd expect two differently themed but linked sites given the markets are so different.
I did a spy party for ds last year (he was 7) and frankly mine sounds more exciting (although I'll concede I had less gadgets!) & was certainly much cheaper!!

Not enough info on what is/isn't included (eg food?) - to me, inclusion of party invites is something I'd expect as standard from pretty much any children's entertainer - after all, it's free advertising for you. Party bags sound good though!

Like others I'd want to know a lot more about security/CRB checking/safety/how experienced your entertainers are with children etc (esp for the general's party which would terrify me!)

Right, will go & have a second look....

Is it literally that one page you're interested in feedback on? On my browser (standard firefox on standard mac laptop) the children's party info is under the fold (ie not visible when you first open the page) -very very few people bother scrolling down on pages (I can look out the data if you like but think it's about 17% of people who will scroll on a home or landing page). So I'd expect you to loose a lot of people who would land on that page, see Hen party stuff, assume you aren't relevant to them, and click off.

Thanks for your feedback. That's why I have asked to review the single page. It is a transitional landing page as we are separating hen parties from child parties. The sites will be different in a month, but it will look like it is now.

@funnypeculiar What is your screen resolution. I work with laptop and i can see the first paragraph and the heads of 4 pictures. Thanks for your comment, we will keep it in mind to make the header narrower.

Are you an entertainer yourself? We have analysed the prices and 2 hour event for 175 seemed an average as we work in London. Recently We have introduced some new games in UK (which are different from those in Lithuania), so there can be a long discussion is it fun for kids or not :)

Also we will be getting CRB checking/safety certificates, so there will no longer be an issue.

Do you find the video boring or interesting? Maybe the Video should be main selling point? what do you think?