I think its worth bearing in mind that this is probably written under the strong guidance of the queer editorial board, with direct supervision by OJ!
She has in fact written from a more woman focused position than this.
They are probably a bit shaken that Suzanne Moore has found this Labour stupidity so awful, but couldn't get her opinion published by the Guardian, that she went to the Telegraph (a sort of heresey for Guardianites).
This is their tokenistic attempt to acknowledge yes there is a sort of problem but really it is because "cis" women aren't being understanding enough.
And as someone has posted on facebook where this is also being discussed, you only have to go to the Guardian's own facebook page where they have this listed in the opinion section, to see that the Guardian's decade long erasing of women's rights has meant that most of their commentators have no inkling that this is anything to do with women's rights.
It is a very strong example of how a newspaper policy or not covering or just dismissing as trivial an issue (eg women's sex based rights) that the majority of readers just absorb this message over time.
(Not only is it badly written, but badly researched. Or as I said little more than a sop to show the Guardian is sort of in touch with the fact that there is an issue - but they aren't going to give it the energy of publicity.)