Yes, Tim was weird, and without any good reason why, either. I mean ... ok ... his mother didn't like him, were we meant to think he was just born wrong?
What was the occasion near the end, Cocodrillo.
Yes, I'd agree it was easy to read. I liked his light touch, the fact we were never told exactly what was being smuggled, there were a few nice instances like that, which I enjoyed. But the gaps were marring.
I guess it is impressive to get something that big published, and I guess that checking for consistency is difficult - I'd assume the gaps happened because not enough fresh eyes were cast over it, it was written, changed a lot, changed some more, and nobody took the time to carefully read through the final draft? Frustrating, because the problems I spotted weren't that big, the changes to fix them weren't complicated ...