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The Lies We Tell by Meg Carter
Well this was a pile of shite. Absolutely should not have finished it, but it's a short book and I wanted it off my list so kept going. It's dual timeline, in 2013 Katy is professionally successful, in a seemingly happy relationship with her perfect fiance and pregnant with her first child. Her life seems absolutely perfect...until childhood friend Jude gets in touch. Katy last saw Jude in the summer of 1989 and that's our second timeline. On a school trip to the Devil's Punch Bowl something went very wrong, Katy and Jude got split up, Katy ended up in an accident and when she was discharged from hospital Jude and her family had moved away and she never saw her again. Now Katy must face the truth of that summer and the secrets she's been keeping not just from those around her but from herself all these years. The premise isn't terrible and is based around the statement "the lies we tell [others] are nothing compared to the lies we tell ourselves" and the human ability to block out and change unpleasant events to cast ourselves in a more positive light
But fuck me this could not have been more badly written. Does a proof reader or editor exist for this book?! I believe they must because they have LEFT NOTES throughout the text for the author to make amendments and the notes have been printed without amendments!!!
Some other glaring issues (and these are just a few examples):
Part of the book is based in Guildford but apparently a quick look at Google maps is beyond Carter's abilities as EVERY landmark and road name she mentions doesn't exist in Guildford (I'm from Guildford so this annoyed me more than it probably should have done). Don't base your book in a real place and then invent all the details of that place
Frequent terrible grammar ("the sprawling south coast town where she grew up in"). This happens all the time!
Constant changes of tense mid sentence ("when he pulled out his hand his fingers are dripping") again, this happens at least once per page. The next sentence will go back to the past tense again
Carter believes the 20 week anomaly scan during pregnancy is only for high risk pregnancies, seriously, Google exists!
This truly terrible piece of writing "Both were facing each other. He behind her, his arm locked around her neck, pulling her backwards. She in front...her hands tearing blindly at the figure behind her"
Well they clearly can't be both facing each other and he behind her back
Half a chapter where Carter forgets which characters perspective she's writing from so completely confuses the story by talking about Katy when it later becomes clear she meant Jude. Makes the whole chapter senseless until you work out that half the references to Katy should be Jude
I actually can't believe this book made it to print in such a state. I especially can't believe how many people were thanked in the acknowledgement for their proof reading and editing support, truly beggars belief that no one picked up on the constant changes in tense and grammatical mistakes