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Why do so many books have chapters like this?

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StealthPolarBear · 27/01/2021 20:02

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Cool the first time someone did it. Getting annoying now.

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Labobo · 27/01/2021 21:55

Just to help the reader navigate the text. People read quickly these days. And maybe the voice isn't that differentiated, so it's easier to tell at a glance who the focus is.

oneglassandpuzzled · 27/01/2021 22:00

This has been done for at least 15 years in many kinds of novels where there is more than one point of view. What bothers you about it?

StealthPolarBear · 27/01/2021 22:04

I don't know, it's a good question. It feels like a gimmick to me, and fairly new. What was wrong with just telling a tale from one perspective, like in the good old days?
See also "you walk into a room. A man is waiting with a gun. You shout for your wife to call the police"
Aaargh.gimmick gimmick gimmick.

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oneglassandpuzzled · 27/01/2021 22:16

Some stories can’t be told in a single point of view, that’s why.

Some might have a present-day and past narrative, for instance, with perhaps the latter taking place before the present-day narrator was born. So it would be impossible for the present-day narrator to tell that part of the story.

If done well it shouldn’t be intrusive, though.

oneglassandpuzzled · 27/01/2021 22:18

And Charles Dickens uses this method in novels such as Bleak House, which has about half a dozen POVs from memory.

So it’s not new.

ZackaryQuack · 27/01/2021 22:21

It's a big thing when 2 authors are writing a story together from the perspective of the 2 main characters, like Eve of Man by Tom and Giovanna Fletcher.

I like it, but I prefer the story told twice from both perspectives.

StealthPolarBear · 27/01/2021 22:21

OK iabu.

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Phineyj · 27/01/2021 22:25

I think it's to facilitate the hoped-for screenplay! I don't like it as I often prefer one of the characters and start skipping forward to their bits.

oneglassandpuzzled · 27/01/2021 22:27

@StealthPolarBear

OK iabu.
Not at all. If it interrupted your reading flow it wasn’t done well.
ZackaryQuack · 27/01/2021 22:34

What @oneglassandpuzzled said, I can't quote a comment with a quote in it 🤷‍♀️

If it doesn't flow and fractures your reading experience then it's poorly done.

oneglassandpuzzled · 27/01/2021 22:39

🙂 And what’s working for one reader may not for another.

littlepeas · 30/01/2021 08:46

Dracula and The Woman in White both have this sort of narrative too - so it’s really not that new and gimmicky!

littlepeas · 30/01/2021 08:49

I’m sure there are loads of other examples, those were the two that came to mind.

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