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mrsmalumbas · 10/05/2007 17:48

Hi all

Has anyone out there written a book (novel)? Or in the process of writing one?

I have always had this feeling that I have a book inside me somewehere, but I'm not sure how to go about finding it!

Would love to share tips/ideas/experiences with other budding authors.

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Bucketsofdynomite · 10/05/2007 18:00

I'm thinking about attempting a Mills & Boon but I'm not sure I've got the staying power. I've came up with half a backbone of a plot and some characters the other day but now it's all seeming like too much hard work. I'm sure 'natural' writers have it all going on in their head all the time.
My mum's a novelist but I don't think you automatically inherit the ability.
Think I need to read some more M&Bs to get a feel for the formula...bleeeurgh!

aikigypsy · 11/05/2007 03:18

I've written a book, and written it again, and re-written it, then done some editing and a little revising, then gone over it again... Every now and then in the process I think it's done and send out a stack of query letters to agents and get back mostly form rejections, with the occasional hand-written note. I'm hope to send out another batch soon.

I've worked on mine pretty steadily over the past 5 1/2 years, with a few months off here and there. It takes a lot longer than I thought it would. I mean, you're always hearing about some whizz kid who churns out a few chapters then gets a 6-figure deal a week later, but the reality isn't like that for most of us. They say that it takes a long time to create an overnight success.

I could go on about this forever. Basically, you have to start with writing the first draft. If you're anything like me, you'll start at least half a dozen first drafts (maybe you've already done this?) before some idea settles in long enough to get to the end of the story. Outlines and character sketches can help.

Most writing books recommend setting asside time to write every day at the same time, in the same place, half an hour to two hours, preferably in the morning. You just start by putting words on paper, one after the other. If you do that for a year, you'll have a lot of words. Whether it's a novel (or a good novel) is another question, but it's a good start.

You can also cram the writing into bits of free time, whenever you get those. There's a new book called Writer Mama which I was looking at in the bookstore today. It's mostly focused on non-fiction, magazine articles, etc. There are dozens, maybe hundreds more which might be called: So Ya Want To Write A Book, Eh?

It also helps to join a writers' group, preferably locally, but on-line is easier.

I'm sure I'll think of more in a minute.

sal13 · 11/05/2007 11:33

I really. really want to write. I have talked and talked about it for sooo long. I have the story in my head from start to finish, but have yet to sit down and write a single word. My dh bought me an apple Mac to write it on, so that I felt motivated,

sal13 · 11/05/2007 15:51

.....sorry dh came home for lunch! .... I know it's just a matter of sitting down and starting, but I haven't. Well done you for all your hard work! It will happen for you, because you are so determined. Make sure you telll us when it is, so we can buy a copy

KathyMCMLXXII · 11/05/2007 15:55

Buckets, why do you want to write a Mills&Boon if you are thinking 'bleeeurgh' at the prospect of reading some?
Write a book you would actually like to read.

UnquietDad · 11/05/2007 16:01

The Louise Doughty book on how to write a novel is out soon. If it's anything like her telegraph colums (which it's based on) it should be good. Nice to see one written by a real novelist.

link here

SoMuchToBits · 11/05/2007 16:06

I'm not writing a book (or thinking of it) but my 6 year old ds is! We were talking last night about the fact there wern't enough good books around with stories about fire engines in, so he has decided to rectify the situation by writing his own! It is caled Fire at the Station, and is about a fire station which catches fire . He's only on the first page so far, but he's done a very nice front cover...

UnquietDad · 11/05/2007 16:07

Sounds good so far!

SoMuchToBits · 11/05/2007 16:09

I'll keep you updated...he's sitting there working on it as I type.

KathyMCMLXXII · 11/05/2007 16:09

I think that's a very good plot.
Does he have some good characters?

emat · 11/05/2007 16:20

I'm not so much writing a book as compiling and illustrating one. It's for 3-6 year olds and their parents to introduce a second language into the home and it's got a v. short story at the start. I've got a publisher who wants to have it out by September which is exciting. I've done 3 versions to get it to the stage it's at and got lots of rejections before now.

I found this book gives good pointers. They have it at my local library.

emat · 11/05/2007 16:22

Sorry I meant this book

SoMuchToBits · 11/05/2007 16:22

I've just asked him about the characters Kathy - but he's being a bit vague, says he hasn't thought about it much yet, and muttered something about "firefighters"

UnquietDad · 11/05/2007 16:54

Hey, at least he is being PC - like Fireman Sam now with the female "firefighter"!

purplemonkeydishwasher · 11/05/2007 16:58

DH and I are thinking of writing a children's book based on some doodles I did of our DS and dog.
we want it to be for really young kids. like Peepo and Dear Zoo.

Bucketsofdynomite · 11/05/2007 19:52

Kathy, I want to write to earn a pittance so DH won't make me go back to work! Mills & Boon seem relatively simple and you don't have to put your heart and soul into it quite as much as a 'proper' novel. I couldn't face doing that, I want a pocket money job not a vocation.

Bucketsofdynomite · 11/05/2007 19:54

Apols to any M&B fans out there .

Elasticwoman · 11/05/2007 20:30

My 12 yo dd is writing one. Luckily she has most of the chapters hard copy because the computer died last week and we had total wipe out. She was still pretty cross to have lost the chapter she was working on.

KathyMCMLXXII · 11/05/2007 21:09

Buckets - I see what you mean, but you still need to enjoy it and I think the readers will know if you talk down to them.
Can't you find another genre of potboiler that you actually like? What do you read yourself?

UnquietDad · 14/05/2007 09:53

Buckets - it's harder than you might think to write an M&B, or anything equally formulaic.

DimpledThighs · 15/05/2007 11:05

my sister writes fulltim e- her first book took a year and now she reckons on about three months for the first draft and another month to polish up.

She also has worked out that on the moeny / royalities she gets she would be better off working in a pub!

DimpledThighs · 15/05/2007 11:08

agree Unquiet dad - M&B are very hard to write - it is hihgly competetive. A friend of mine is thinking of putting together a 'so you think you could write a mills and boon' workshop for the literary festivals - do you think there would be uptake?

DimpledThighs · 15/05/2007 11:09

if you really want to do a m*b there is lots of guidance and support you can get.

aikigypsy · 15/05/2007 13:28

What Dimpled and Unquiet said. You should write what you want to read, or what you like to read, at least. It's not easy to write category fiction, so you'd better pick a book you can stand to live with for a long, long time. 3 months is pretty quick. I can do a rough draft in 2 months, but the rewriting takes much, much longer (don't go by that, though, everyone's process is different).

I know a lot more about the US market than the UK. This is a good site, if you're really interested in writing a M&B Romance Writers of America Here's a page on what you might be paid (again, this is the US market).

I'm not sure I got those links right. If not, it's www.karenafox.com/money.htm and www.rwanational.org

DimpledThighs · 15/05/2007 13:30

oh yes I should say 3 months is amazinlgy quick - but what my sister writes is formulaic rather than deep clever fiction.