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SorchaMumsnet · 26/08/2016 13:48

Have you read tense psychological thriller, The Perfect Girl? Find out more about the book - and read an extract - on the giveaway page.

Musical genius Zoe and mother Maria seem to have the perfect life. So when Maria dies in mysterious circumstances, Zoe's world is shattered - but only she can piece together the truth.

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Have you read The Perfect Girl by Gilly Macmillan? Post feedback for a chance to win a £100 Love2Shop Voucher!
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Valski · 29/09/2016 11:39

Thanks Mumsnet for my copy - planning to read over the weekend and will post thoughts, but in case anyone is interested, I found some book club discussion questions for the book.

Here is the link:
www.readinggroupguides.com/reviews/the-perfect-girl/guide

And here are the questions.

Discussion Questions

  1. What advantages do Zoe’s abilities give her? Can you understand why Maria pushed her daughter musically? What responsibility do you think parents have to a child showing strong aptitude for something? What is fostering and what is pushing too hard?
  1. Zoe makes a very difficult decision towards the end of THE PERFECT GIRL, one that will certainly have significant and long-lasting consequences both for herself and others. Do you think she did the right thing? How much sympathy do you have for her?
  1. To what extent do you think of Maria as a victim, or as somebody who is deliberately deceiving others?
  1. What does the character of Zoe’s solicitor add to the novel?
  1. What is the importance of music and its redemptive power in the novel?
  1. At the end of the book both Tess and Richard seem to have an inkling that Zoe has deceived everybody but they don’t discuss this. Do you think they will talk about it eventually, and work out what might have happened and, if so, what do you think they’ll do as a result?
  1. Lucas is a quiet character. How do you feel about him? Do you think he’ll thrive in his new family, or could he be in danger of ultimately remaining loyal to his father and telling the truth about what happened?
  1. A number of novels deal with the burden of a deadly secret --- how well do you think this idea is handled in THE PERFECT GIRL?
  1. Do you recognize some of the pressures that the family find themselves under more generally? Is that urge to keep up with others, to be a successful unit, to put on a good show familiar to you?
  1. “My mother: who never talks about what really matters…” How far is this question explored in the book?

  2. The ending is both satisfying for Zoe and enigmatic --- how successful do you think it is, and do you think Chris deserved what happened to him at the end?

Back when finished!

navylass · 29/09/2016 17:39

A thoroughly compelling read with deep and interesting characters. Highly recommended.

BathshebaDarkstone · 30/09/2016 10:19

I've really enjoyed this book, I finished it and started again! It's interesting how all the characters' lives tie together.

CatsMum1 · 30/09/2016 14:19

This was a brilliant book from beginning to end. The narrative and setting of the story and characters was superb. I have written a more detailed review which will be posted on the blog I write for soon. I would highly recommend this to anyone who likes character driven stories and something with a little suspense and intrigue.

elizimmy · 30/09/2016 18:16

I'm about 3/4 of the way through now and really enjoying this book! Will pop back with my thoughts when I'm finished.

MaryJ85 · 01/10/2016 08:03

Thanks mumsnet! I'm just about to start reading this, so will let you know how it goes.

elizimmy · 01/10/2016 23:07

Finished this afternoon! This was a great read but I can't shake the feeling that the story ended too abruptly Confused it left me wanting more and I'm struggling to understand what point Sam had in it all and would love to have known more about what happened to all of the characters. Don't get me wrong though, this is a good book, well written and I enjoyed reading all of the characters perspectives. I also enjoyed the story's twists and turns which kept me guessing and kept the suspense going right to the end. I will definitely be reading more by Gilly Macmillan. Thank you Mumsnet for the opportunity to read this book.

dannydog1 · 02/10/2016 19:11

Certainly a compelling read and I like the way the chapters are the story from the different characters aspects. I am only halfway through the book. Although a compelling read I do find it rather sad and unnerving in that it makes me think in real life how we don't really know each other, and how life experiences shapes us.

Valski · 02/10/2016 19:30

I mentioned to Gilly Macmillan because I heard that the book was originally intended to be titled as Butterfly in the Dark. I suggested an alternative: The Butterfly in the Bell Jar.

Posting my review later, but definitely keen to read her debut novel, Burnt Paper Sky. Not sure why but I think that has been renamed as What She Knew and at the moment it is only 99p on Kindle.

Really enjoyed but I didn't think qualified as a thriller because by virtue of the reader knowing that Maria (the mother) dies, not a great deal happened that was unexpected. Having said that I was really engrossed.. I adored Zoe's prickliness and in your face humour! Review later.. Valski xx

Valski · 02/10/2016 22:30

Not sure where to post my review - on here or not? Review below, apologies if in wrong place.

The Perfect Girl is a touchingly profound story of a parent fulfilling their dreams through their child and simultaneously a heartbreaking insight into just how a parents misplaced nurturing can focus undo emphasis on one aspect of a child's character, honing it to the point of obsession and thereby coming to define a child by their ability. This is a tragic story which should be compulsory reading for all parents nowadays and it is both a poignant and deeply thought provoking read. In an increasingly competitive world where gaining the edge is at the forefront of every parents mind as they launch their offspring into the 'survival of the fittest culture' of the modern world, The Perfect Girl is more relevant than ever.

Precociously talented pianist Zoe Guerin is the epitome of a gifted child at the age of fourteen, but one mistake leads to a very spectacular fall from grace and has seismic repercussions. As a music scholar at a prestigious school she is made well aware of her status as 'official pond life' and the Popular Girls that rule the roost are very keen to make sure that she knows her place. Bullied and with her self-esteem cripplingly low, she is attracted to the fringes of the hangers-on that ache to be cool and fit in amongst the Popular Girls. Until one mistake changes all of that, and Zoe's life becomes a question of "what if's" and shows just how fickle fate can be. Taking what she thinks is the most sensible decision in the circumstances and driving her drunken best friend home one moment of lapsed concentration leaves Zoe facing responsibility for the deaths of three teens whilst driving under the influence of drink. A damning charge for anyone, even more so for a fourteen-year-old who should never have been behind the wheel in the first place and swears blind she never knowingly consumed excessive alcohol. Sentenced to eighteen-months in a Secure Unit, mother Maria's life descends into free fall as her determination to save Zoe's promise and obvious potential drives a wedge between her and husband, Philip. Until that is Maria, Zoe's Key Worker at the Unit, Jason and her sister, Tessa come to the agreement that her talent could also be her route to redemption.

As Zoe performs her first recital post life in the Secure Unit, now living anonymously under the name Zoe Maisey in a suburb of Bristol, complicit in keeping her past a closely guarded secret from step-father, Chris and his son, Lucas, she understands the strained tension which reigns inside the confines of her new home. Perceptively coined as her Second Chance Life, step-brother, Lucas and Zoe take to the stage and begin a duet, only for an furious outburst from a grieving parent of one of the children left dead in the car accident to throw her new life up into the air. Just hours later that Sunday evening Zoe's mother, Maria, is dead. The synopsis tells readers of Maria's fate prior to the outset of the novel, and builds on the heightened anxiety in the aftermath of the outburst and Gilly Macmillan makes her readers wait for the horrific event. The timeframe of Sunday night through to Monday morning is placed under a microscopic spotlight as Macmillan delivers a blow by blow account of the drama that unfolds, allowing glimpses into Zoe's past to drip feed through to form a clearer picture of just what has brought her and the ever supportive Maria to this point. Emotions are clearly worn on sleeves and in the heady aftermath of the downfall of the Second Chance Family in the Second Chance Life granted to her, Zoe's on-point narrative also reveals her estrangement from her natural father, Philip. Zoe is hugely thankful for her post Secure Unit shot at a new life and although she is sensible enough to acknowledge the instability of her mother, Zoe's willingness to go along with the charade and keep her past secret from Chris shows just how firmly devoted to her mother she is.

Zoe is an easy person to vie for but the reality is that she has seen and heard enough during her time in the Secure Unit to understand that her history cannot be erased and she is "damaged property", with the knowledge that her reputation that will often go before her. To all intents and purposes, Zoe was sober when she took the wheel of the car and someone's else's testimony was her downfall. In Zoe's eyes her honesty was never rewarded in the ensuing trial, reflecting just how flawed the justice system can be. Inevitably it is this knowledge which is at the forefront of Zoe's mind in the closing stages of the novel and the most lasting reflection of her time inside has shown her that there is a often a stark difference between the truth and the hand that the justice system deals out. Sometimes the system is flawed and it was a source of real pity for me that at the age of seventeen Zoe is sceptical of how unjust this can be. That Zoe is cynical in the wake of her mothers death and to some extent plays the system is understandable as she factors in the implications of the nightmare that she finds herself amidst.

Written using multiple points of view offered by Zoe, her aunt Tessa and her solicitor, Sam Locke, this is a heartbreakingly sad novel. Sam, like many of the professionals who came into contact with Zoe during the course of her prior life is profoundly sympathetic, and his impartial observer commentary reveals his sadness at just how Zoe's future has been compromised, neither deserved or in the least bit reflective of her behaviour in general. Sam is emotionally drawn into the plight of her situation by his burgeoning relationship with Zoe's aunt Tessa. Not hearing from step-father Chris but merely observing his brooding menace as he struts around his perfect home emphasises the threat that he poses over the fragile calm that holds court in Zoe and Maria's Second Life. Zoe's fiercely ironic humour and sharp wit is wonderfully incisive, often cutting through the futility of a life spent papering over the cracks. Zoe does not expect to eschew her responsibilities for her behaviour, but the unfairness of her honesty resulting in a guilty outcome at her trial does stick in her throat and undoubtedly plays a part in her knowledge that she has to take control of her destiny in the wake of Maria's death. Admittedly both Tessa and Sam sympathise with the situation that Zoe finds herself in, and perhaps a voice from her past, either natural dad, Philip, or a parent of one of the teens whose lives were taken would have added a contrasting opinion and perhaps made for a more balanced feel towards the attitudes of a young girl who made one fatal mistake.

In hindsight, perhaps the ending is tied up a little neatly, but The Perfect Girl is an engrossing read that poses so many important questions about nurturing our children that I reflected long and hard. Gilly Macmillan delivers a brilliant portrayal of a girl who deserved better, not simply shoehorned into a home life bound by strict adherences to social conventions. Insightful step-brother, Lucas is Zoe's only ally within the home and they both see what their parents trying to hold up the proverbial house of cards. The suspense element of The Perfect Girl is limited as readers know Maria's outcome and despite racing through this book, I did have a very strong inclination of what the future would hold for Zoe, Lucas and baby Grace. The Perfect Girl is less a thriller, more a touching insight into a bright future comprised by one mistake. To Zoe, piano playing is never considered as a gift, but rather something that she works hard at, practising for hours. Whether Zoe pursues her piano playing as avidly as she does knowing that it is her mother Maria's wish seems likely, although this is never addressed by Macmillan. The Perfect Girl is a sharp insight into how damaging the bond between a parent and child simply trying to do their best for each other can be.

The Perfect Girl is at times an uncomfortable read as the spotlight is turned onto Zoe's future but it left me with plenty of food for thought and has also introduced me to Gilly Macmillan, whose highly rated debut, Burnt Paper Sky (now re-titled What She Knew) is firmly in my sights! The sub-plot of Tessa, married to alcoholic husband, Richard and drawn to sensitive solicitor, Sam adds a frisson of tension to proceedings and I was pleased that Gilly Macmillan also provided a resolution to both this and Zoe's future into the close.

keenmum · 04/10/2016 09:37

I finally read this book last night, and stayed up way past my bedtime (2:00am), you can guess it was the sorry which kept me going.

I fell in love with characters Maria and Zoe, how unfortunate event turns their lives upside down.

Going back and forth about each characters take or happening was little tiring, nevertheless you keep reading.

At the end story is little predictable specially agate Zoe reads her mum's email, but you want to know how so you keep going.

Great book.

Thanks mumsnet for a copy

SoniaLeroux21 · 05/10/2016 14:19

Thank you to Mumsnet and the publisher of this book to send me a free copy of The Perfect Girl by Gilly Macmillan.
I finally manage to read and finish this book within a couple of days.
It is the first time I am reading a book from this author. This book is nicely written. The story plot flowed nicely and the characters were intriguing with the interweaving of their perspectives on the story. It was full of tension with twists and turns in the story that kept me riveted. It was a nice and enjoyable book to read.

SorchaMumsnet · 10/10/2016 09:20

Hi - thanks for all your feedback on The Perfect Girl. Looks like some of you were a bit divided on the multiple viewpoints but overall found it a twisty-turny good read!

The winner of the prize draw is... elizimmy. Congratulations!

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Nanalou · 07/11/2016 21:35

This was a very well written book and very much a page turner, an excellent read. Will definitely read more from this author.

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