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ccgirr · 29/10/2016 17:52

Hi all
I have an interview on Monday and need to teach for 20 mins on creative writing. Seems very short. My first thought was Halloween but now I'm thinking the school might not mention Halloween as it is secondary. Would loved advice on how to keep it punchy but def show I've taught something in the 20. Help please

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ImperialBlether · 29/10/2016 17:58

Oooh this sounds interesting.

What age are the students?

petalpower · 29/10/2016 18:58

Make sure it's not a church school if you're going to do something about. Halloween.

LockedOutOfMN · 29/10/2016 19:10

Some kind of slow writing? Short but sweet?

ccgirr · 29/10/2016 19:17

Hopefully short but sweet!! Year 8 creative writing. Not a church school but maybe still risky.

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HappyHeart87 · 29/10/2016 19:20

What about poetry?

Split them into groups and give each group a page with 3 haikus written on it. Tell them "these are haikus, see what they have in common". 5 mins.

Plenary - ask them "what's a haiku"? Elicit the important points (lines, words, poetry ect). 5 mins.

Individual work - each write a haiku. Wander around and give effusive praise and specific feedback. Volunteers to read theirs out. 10 min.

wobblywonderwoman · 29/10/2016 19:22

Could you provide blank newspaper template and some sentence starters

Maybe some rhymes for tricky word spellings / conjunctions etc

Zumbumba · 29/10/2016 19:27

I'd stick to teaching one technique (if concerned about the Hallowe'een link, claim it's gothic instead...)

Depends on their ability but you could teach either metaphors or extended metaphors - and Show Don't Tell is always an easy win.

C: What creepy things can you imagine happening on Hallowe'een?
A: Model difference between Showing and Telling description
D: Pupils write own examples - use a picture stimulus of something like a creepy looking door
C: Hear examples

ImperialBlether · 29/10/2016 19:47

Curtis Brown, a huge literary agency, have a Pitch Day on the last Friday of the month, on Twitter.

People have to use 140 characters to write a plot which would attract an agent.

If you did this, then homework/next lesson could be writing the story.

ImperialBlether · 29/10/2016 19:48

Or you could have three bags, one with nouns, one with adjectives, one with verbs. Each student takes one from each bag, then writes a story of a set number of sentences.

They get to read them out to the class.

ccgirr · 29/10/2016 19:57

Some fab ideas guys thanks. I love the haiku plan as I think it's small enough that they could demonstrate they'd actually learned so it has a pow and the bags of word types is very very tempting. Feel like I'm doubting myself and ability to demonstrate true ability in 20

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ImperialBlether · 29/10/2016 20:02

What about using the bag of words to write a haiku?

ImperialBlether · 29/10/2016 20:04

But to fit an explanation of what a haiku is, give them the words, get them to write one, get them to read it aloud and then finish off the lesson is probably too much in half an hour.

ImperialBlether · 29/10/2016 20:04

In 20 minutes, I mean.

PopFizz · 29/10/2016 20:06

Why not something to do with Gothic writing? Think Dracula, Frankenstein, or even the more accessible for Y8 of nightmare before Christmas, Coralline etc. There's loads on the web about it all (I had to cover an English lesson last year with no real work on this! The kids loved doing a drawing and mindmap to get the ideas for a poem or opening paragraph for a story)

Tillyscoutsmum · 29/10/2016 20:10

Haiku (about Autumn). They should know what they are so v.quick recap on features. Give them some Autumn images. 5 mins then brainstorming adjectives/verbs/adverbs for the images. Model a Haiku verse based on one of the images. Let them write their own for another image. Share some examples and peer assess. Just done this with Year 4 primary class in 1 hour but 1 verse for secondary should be do able in 20 mins..??

Tillyscoutsmum · 29/10/2016 20:13

Some my Year 4's came up with

Small, red, round berries
Glistening in morning dew
Like sparkling rubies

Shiny, brown, conkers
Peeking from their hedgehog shells
Ready for battle!

A carpet of leaves
Crispy, crunchy, colourful
Huddled together

Brown sycamore seeds
Gently flutter and float down
Like helicopters

A hungry squirrel
Eagerly gathers acorns
Hibernation time!

pieceofpurplesky · 29/10/2016 20:14

I would avoid Halloween. Remember now most schools are looking towards to the new curriculum - in twenty minutes I would look at doing something with sentence construction so that you can constantly check progress - what ability are the pupils?

ccgirr · 29/10/2016 20:29

Yes blether 20 is not long when need to intro and plenary. Wow Tully they are fab. Def should be proud. Pupils mixed but most about old level 5 aiming 6. Gothic sentences could be a good one.

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Scorbus · 30/10/2016 07:38

What about war poetry, could be done in haiku form.

ccgirr · 31/10/2016 12:31

I got it guys thanks for help. I used a combination of ideas.

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HappyHeart87 · 31/10/2016 17:48

You got it? As in you got the job? OP well done that's amazing!

LockedOutOfMN · 31/10/2016 20:26

Well done, OP!

thatsn0tmyname · 31/10/2016 20:28

Could you write words on post- its and get pupils to group them or place them on a sliding scale, eg, most scary to least scary?

ccgirr · 31/10/2016 21:19

Yes got the job! 🎉🎉

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Tillyscoutsmum · 01/11/2016 22:02

Congratulations 🎉🎉🎈

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