I thought you had to state a reason for every single change you want made? 
I am just going through it creating a box under each of their points, with my rewritten version in it and was intending to cut and paste a standard quote about theirs not meeting the requirements of the Education Act 1986 and or SENCOP and or anything else I can throw at them. Gotta love all that stuff on the IPSEA website. 
Do I not need to quote law at them and tell them exactly why their statement is crap then?
I think I will definitely feel happier once I have at least pulled something together that I would be happy with before I contact them to say I'm not happy. I dread not having something to pull out of the hat at short notice if I'm ill, which is something that tends to happen every time I get stressed.
I was thinking I'd get my version ready over the weekend, speak to the SENCO first thing Monday to ask her to go through it with me asap this week and then post the form they've sent me to either approve or disapprove of the statement on the way home. I think it will get delayed then, as you have to return the form to disapprove and they won't receive it until the latter end of next week, then they have to contact me to arrange a meeting.
Based on their calculations, our deadline would be 18 April (ds2's Birthday) but of course that's slap bang in the middle of the holiday. I'm really booked up the following week as well with various Paed appointments etc, so realistically I can't see us meeting until the first week in May.
I know I'm being stressy about wanting to get my version done straight away. I just can't stand to have things hanging around, as I can't stop churning it all over in my head. Once its done, I can forget about it until the meeting and enjoy the Easter Holidays, which encompass both boys' birthdays ... and then come back refreshed and ready to fight! 