Is it a Proposed Statement or a Final?
If it is proposed then you should be able to request a meeting with the person who wrote the statement so you can explain how you would like it to read.
If it's a final draft then you can request an interim review where you can ask for changes to be made.
A good statement should describe your child well, so that anyone who will be working with them gets a good idea of who they are as a person. It doesn't matter if it's a mixture of bullet points, sentences or paragraphs as long as it reads well, and you are happy that the description of your child is acurate.
In part three the objectives for your child should be clear, and should have come from the advice given during the SA process, and therefore be relevant and useful for your child. Part three should also give specific programmes of support and detail frequency. (beware of the word "regular" e.g "X should have regular access to the speech therapist." After all, once a year is regualar! It needs to specify frequency and intensity.
If you are reading a statement that leaves you feeling confused about exactly what your child will be getting then the chances are its not a well written statement. Statements should be documents that can actually be used to help map out and plan a special education for a child that all educational proffesionals can actually use, not a piece of meaning legal waffle that is filed in a drawer in the senco's office!!!!!!!
If I were you I would ask to meet with the person that wrote it.
Hope that helps.