In my email to LA:
Should I state that I am not happy with some of the contents in section B and F in my appeal?
You don’t appeal to the LA. You appeal to SENDIST. If you read the letter, it will explain how to appeal. By all means email the LA pointing out you intend to appeal and why, but you need to appeal to SENDIST.
Or should I make the amendments and then send the document?
When you submit an appeal, you can send your grounds of appeal. During the appeal process, you get a working document; this is where you propose the amendments required.
I think I need an EP's input for the amendments.
An EP assessment will help, but you don’t need to wait for the EP report before submitting an appeal. You can propose any amendments you already have evidence for then add in more/amend when you get further evidence.
Do I mention needs reassessment?
Personally, no, I would not request a reassessment of needs. I would appeal.
Can I still name the schools in my appeal?
You can appeal section I as well as B&F.
Can I ask for 'alternate provision' whilst they approach schools? Or wait for them to come back with a potential school?
Request AP now.