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Students tend to do badly on section d because schools are over teaching section e because it is worth half the paper.
Is she just studying Christianity? If so in those section d questions she needs where possible to give two different Christian responses with evidence. Usually a bible passage or church teaching. To get the higher grades she also needs to explain how Christian beliefs are driven by certain beliefs about God and humanity rather than simply blindly following bible passages. For example Christians believe in helping the poor because they believe humanity was created in the image of God and therefore all human life needs respecting and if necessary protecting. To put in a modern context the life of what MN would call the underclass is equal with a banker and a nurse because they were all created in he image of God.
Section e questions are testing their ability to construct an argument and evaluate the views of others. With some of my mid to lower ability students I say to start with their own view , as hopefully they know that! It also gets them thinking . Then explain two different Christian views with evidence etc. they then respond to those two different views and say which hey agree with any why. Again using evidence to support their view. They then need to look at the flaws in their own argument both given at the start and when they said which Christian view is closest to their own. In their conclusion they need to respond to that criticism , basically despite what others might say I am right because. ...
If they are aiming for a high grade they also need to show why the issue being discussed is an important one , how it impacts on every day life.
A structure for the above might be
I think this is a significant issue because...
My view on the statement is...
my evidence is...
A Christian response might be ...
Their evidence would be...
An alternative christian response would be...
Their evidence would be.....
My feeling on these Christian responses is
My view could be criticised ...
I think my view is correct because
If she needs less structure she could simply follow this structure
A Christian view is ....
Their evidence is ...
This could be criticised by...
I think....
And keep doing this...
I worry of the latter structure encourages mid to lower ability students to compare different Christian views.
I know some students encourage then to answer the longer questions first as the timing is difficult. I think this is a mistake for two reasons . The paper builds in difficulty and therefore the earlier questions give then confidence and can also prompt ideas to use in he harder questions. Secondly it is much easier to pick up marks in part a b and c whereas it may take longer to get the marks in section e.
The exam board website is worth looking at for past papers, you can see what kind of question she might face. Mark schemes you can see what they are looking for. . Examiner reports, you can see what previous candidates have done well so you can do it and what others have done wrong so you can avoid it .
She will need to learn bible passages. Depending on the units she is doing she may find that some passages can be used for a number of topics therefore cutting down the revision. A word of warning though they will penalise you of you use the same material again and again .