Children's Stories

[AgathosD]

Not sure if anyone can help but it's been suggested I give this a go. I am in the middle of developing some children's stories and wondered if any parents here would be happy to give some feedback?

I've converted some to narrated video and uploaded them to Youtube - if you want to watch them with your child(children). Something else to do during lockdown!

Or they can be found for free on either Vocal Media or Yours2Read or Booksie.

Look for Agathos Daimon on of the self publisher sites or the Agathos Daimon Animated Storyteller Channel on YT.

Any feedback welcome within the bands of reasonableness and polite language - even if it's 'Give Up'.

Thanks in advance.
Stay safe all.
Friends and family have been 'nice' about efforts so far so now time to step into the real workd!

Hello, I've had a look on YouTube and they look very nice and well presented.
I would say that one I listened to (about a bee) would interest younger dc than mine (my youngest is 8) but the language/vocabulary used is quite advanced and beyond the age of the story? That is just my opinion though

I've listened to the Trotters one. It was quite weird. Convoluted language, with a lot of focus on the passive voice.
Not keen on the weird love theme either. Why encourage children to believe that farmers have animals because they love them?

Thanks for feedback. Comments noted. :)