Hi OP. Firstly you'd need to know if this raised area formed part of the planning permission. Secondly, if it does not form part of the planning permission, you'll need to decipher if it falls within the realms of permitted development.
Within the GPDO (General Permitted Development Order) alterations to a dwelling house are permitted with some restrictions, one of which being:
"Development is not permitted if:
(K)(I) it would consist of or include the construction or provision of a verandah, balcony or raised platform"
This is clarified as:
"Raised in relation to a platform means a platform with a height greater than 0.3 meters".
So, if the platform isn't within the planning permission, and is raised above 0.3 meters it is IMO (without seeing it) a breach of planning.
If the house is in an area with an article 4 order in place (most councils do this in conservation areas) then the homeowner won't benefit from permitted development at all.
If you think it is a breach of planning permission, have your friend take photos of the raised area and contact the planning enforcement team for her local authority and explain her privacy concerns. It might not be a priority for them and it might take them a while to act but they'll have 4 years to serve an enforcement notice on the landowner requiring him to remove the raised area.