This is going to reiterate a lot of points people have already made, but taking the pics in turn:
1: practical front. Lots of parking. Not hugely charming but it’s good enough to make me click through.
2: POND!!!! If I am a family buyer with kids the alarm bells will go off very loudly at this point.
3: kitchen looks rather spartan. Narrow and with insufficient cupboard space, and that empty wall above the cooker is charmless. It also looks dark. Imagining spending a fair proportion of my waking day in there is a depressing thought.
4: conservatory with a view of next door’s wall and an ugly garage. Not enticing.
5: nice wood fire but ARTEX CEILING! 2nd set of alarm bells ring. I’d want to get that redone which would be a pain.
6: perfectly functional and light hallway, nice
7: uh-oh. The sitting room is basically part of the conservatory! So the nice cosy room I saw in pic 5 is actually very light and draughty and has that view of the neighbour’s wall and a garage which I saw in pic 4. Oh dear all the charm has gone. And the space looks oddly used - either stage it as a completely different area or incorporate it into the sitting room with more sofas etc.
8: looks like a v cramped bedroom. Is this the master bedroom? I would be worrying it was too small. Looks like a nice view from the window but I can’t see it properly.
9: perfectly functional bedroom, is that a single bed? Is it too small for a double? Ok so now I’m thinking all the bedrooms are small and cramped.
10: bathroom looks like it will be cold.
11: nice hallway shot but the bed in the nearest room seems to be blocking the door from opening properly. So the bedrooms ARE tiny! This confirms my previous suspicion.
12-13: looks like half of this is the neighbour’s garden so it feels v overlooked (I know you’ve explained it isn’t)
14: the dreaded offputting pond again. And that picnic table isn’t very charming - I’m not really imagining family life out there in the summer. Would feel a bit like a pub garden. I like the shade awning though.
Then I would turn to the floor plan:
- confirms suspicion that conservatory is part of sitting room so you only have two downstairs rooms. With 4 bedrooms I’d want a separate space for the kids of some kind, like a casual sitting room area in the kitchen or somesuch.
- upstairs layout is SO cramped, that fourth bedroom has really been crowbarred in and it makes the upstairs corridor look as though it will be v narrow and dark.