To this ex-Londoner it's a terraced house and you want nearly a million for it. That aside, it's got good kerb appeal but the blind down in the front window makes me think that you have no privacy - that's probably true of many terraced streets but the blind being down draws attention to it.
The hall is lovely.
The room in picture 3 has a lovely view, I think I'd have a sofa there not a table to make the most of the view - as you've got a TV there it looks like that would be a logical use of the space and maybe more appealing. The room looks like the only place to watch television is sitting at the table.
The kitchen tiles are a little dated; perhaps you could get some tile paint and make them look more modern? I wouldn't bother me in a house round where we live that would cost about £150k max but for 900k it would bother me.
In the pink bedroom, I'd replace the curtains for some grey ones and have a grey cover on the bed as it looks a bit too pink. I'd also consider changing the doors or stripping them and painting/staining them as they look quite old fashioned.
picture 6/7/8 - maybe add a rug (that you can take with) into the middle of the room. Paint the ceiling white, put a picture on the empty wall.
picture 9 - it looks very cluttered with the table at the front of the photo and it doesn't do the room any favours. Move the table and get the estate agent to retake this photo.
picture 14 - move the chest of drawers at the end of the bed and put the stool central at the end of the bed and have the photo retaken.
picture 15/16 - it's labelled as the 2nd bedroom but it's not a bedroom; either make it look like a bedroom or have it labelled as another reception room.
picture 17 - get the photo taken so it doesn't focus on the filing cabinets. Have the room labelled as a study/bedroom 3 not just bedroom 3.
picture 18 - words fail me. This would stop me from viewing. What is in the bidet?! Change the wall covering for something plain and lose the pictures. Remove the mirror over the bath.
picture 19 - replace the table with a nice table and chairs set or a sofa and chairs that you can take with you. Add some brightly coloured pots with ever greens or plants with bright leaves. Give the impression of a lovely outside space where you can dine in the evenings. Stain the fence and shed a lovely colour. Paint the white wall a lovely, bright colour (if it's your wall)