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What sort of essay would you expect an 8 year old to be able to write?

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herecomesthsun · 25/01/2017 19:39

DS has some difficulties sitting down and writing in class. He had an essay type homework this week, the first extended piece of writing he has been asked to do this year. He could pretty much choose any topic he liked.

He wanted to use my laptop for this and I agreed. I showed him how to use spell check and word count and he was getting on famously, and easily managed a few hundred words.

I thought it would be a good idea to consolidate this and suggested that if he managed 1,000 words he might get a Lego reward. He saw this as a worthy challenge and easily managed it on a history subject he liked. He also copied his work out neatly into his homework book (I guess it was good handwriting practice).

His teachers seem to have been hugely impressed by this. Is it very unusual? Have I demanded too much? (I haven't got much idea how much they'd expect kids this age to write).

Or it might just be the contrast between how little he writes in class left to get on with it himself, perhaps? He does need a lot of encouragement/ chivvying/ consoling when he can't think what to write.

I'd be interested in any advice re supporting him also. My husband was a bit disapproving of the erm incentives.

Maybe trying to get him to write letters to fave authors/ Blue Peter/ Lego etc would be good.

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herecomesthsun · 25/01/2017 21:02

I thought it was bad manners to look at other children's work at open days? It really isn't something I do. I generally look at my son's (rather empty looking) note books instead.

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Oblomov17 · 25/01/2017 21:10

Hand writing all over the walls as part of displays, I'm meant!

Geraldthegiraffe · 25/01/2017 21:12

Arg. Stealth boast instead. Parent managed to bribe child to write 1000 words instead of do homework set. I'd put a line through and write "irrelevant" but I teach older children!

herecomesthsun · 25/01/2017 21:18

I was really pleased to get him writing anything really. It seemed like the sort of thing he would get a block about and it seems really positive that he knows he can just sit down and write and be appreciated for it (by his teachers as well as with Lego).

I would have preferred him to follow the brief more closely, but getting words on the paper is at least a start.

I went for the word count as I thought he should have a bit of a challenge to get the Lego.

Any better ideas really appreciated.

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bojorojo · 26/01/2017 15:02

What sort of better idea? "Resistant to following structure which is a disadvantage in course work" . What course work? Do you mean doing what the teacher asks in class? This sounds hugely formal and not an education I recognise. Nor is 1000 words age 8. What is the point? However I suppose it gives something to write about!!! Maybe the Lego Manual will be the next tome we can discuss! I am looking forward to it.

WritingPaperSucks · 27/10/2018 22:52

You are very demanding of a child as I see.

Kokeshi123 · 28/10/2018 11:20

God, the stealth boasting on here gets more and more boring each day. By "stealth boasting," I don't mean the act of noting that some 8yos might be able to write a 1,000-word essay (some kids are precocious and well-supported and that is wonderful) but the whole air of "surely this is normal....!?" No, it wouldn't be.

onemouseplace · 28/10/2018 13:42

My DD(8) could - I suspect not all of it would be relevant and I'd need to help her with suggestions for the structure, but I'm pretty sure she could research and write a 1,000 word essay.

DS (7) on the other hand - no chance. He needs coaxing and cajoling to get more than a couple of sentences together.

thatmustbenigelwiththebrie · 29/10/2018 15:16

Poor teacher having to wade through 1000 words of 8 year old's crap!

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