I would add a photo to show the writing (joined up) but DD's name is throughout the story. Just interested to know if she's progressed from previous NC 2a, or if it's the same, as this was written at home?
Stardust’s Dinosaur Adventure
One late afternoon a little girl went to the natrel history museum. She was called Stardust and she had long brown silky hair. She had a lovely darck pink sparkerly dress.
Stardust’s mummy went with her because she didn’t have a daddy. When they got there they met a lady called Joan. Joan worked on the top floor of the museum. “You can go off and explore” said Stardust’s mummy.
Just then Stardust bumped into Andy from Andy’s Wild Adventures.
“Do you want me to show you around?” said Andy.
Stardust said “yes please.”
So Andy showed Stardust around. They saw a magic clock that could take them back in time!
“If you like I can take you back in time” said Andy.
“Yes yes yes yes! said Stardust excitedly.
So Andy said “take us to the time of Tyrannosaurus Rex!” (suck suck)
“Woooooooooooooooo”
The machine clicked and clacked scraped and banged!
BOOM They landed with a bump!
“Where are we?” said Stardust trembling.
“We’re in the land of Tyrannosaurus Rex!” said Andy. Stardust looked around and saw it was very dusty. Next she saw a big mountain of trees and quite near there was a bubbling volcano. Just then she smelled a horrible smell. It smelled of rotten eggs. Suddenly she heard big feet on the ground and saw lots of dinosaurs.
First they saw a Brontosaurus! He was very big and long he had a very, very, very long neck and tail. He was very fat too! Next they saw a stegosaurus he had plaits on his back. He was eating some dry yellow grass chomping it up. Just then she smelled a fishy smell it was coming from the air. She looked up and she saw a shiny pterosaurus with a wigly wagly fish in it’s mouth.
Suddenly they heard a gigantick roar! It was the T- rex stomping out of the wood. Stardust let out a frightened scream that was so loud it caused a stampeed! Andy and Stardust were very scaird. Just then they heard a big thump it was T. Rex! But Andy had a special bag with helpful things inside. Andy quickly looked in his bag and found a spade.
“Quick” said Stardust “The dinosaurs are coming!”
Andy dug a hole as fast as a cheeta. Then they climed into the hole to hide until the stamping of feet had
GONE… [This was written with the letters in descending size]
Looking in his bag Andy found a rope and he lassoed a rock. After they climbed out they ran to the clock and went back to the museum.
“Thank you so much Andy” said Stardust “good bye and see you soon!”
Stardust felt so happy as she hugged her mummy!