This is a piece of writing that DD wrote over the weekend (entirely independently). It's similar to the sort of stuff she normally writes at home. Just wondered what sort of level you thought it was? And, more importantly what she should be looking to improve next (I realise there are a few things)? I'm asking because I'm struggling to reconcile what her teachers are telling me with what I see of her writing at home (which I realise may be because her writing at school is different to that at home).
Her handwriting is good, all letters legible and of consistent size. It's about 50% joined. Spelling and punctuation shown are hers. (I've added a paragraph to make it easier to read)
Once upon a time there were two girl twin princesses called Rose and Lilly. One day Rose and Lillys mother wanted the children to go out and diliver invertashens. So the two good little children went out with the basket that had the invertashens in. They where skipping alone when they got to the vilige they started to walk instead. these are the people on the party list there where ... Tommy, Poppy, Jasmine, Sophie and Alfie.
On the day of the party the girls were rellay exsited. They where going to turn 10! They where dancing to music when the door bell rang, they ran to the door. It was their cusens Tommy and Poppy. They gave the girls presents and said politly "can you show us to the payrome please?". "Yes", said Rose. But once they got to the playrome the doorbell rang again.
thanks for any help.