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monkeyfarm · 10/12/2012 11:03

Would anyone be so kind as to give me a rough idea of a level for this piece please? I will write it as dd has.

Once upon a time there was a christmas tree it was a green glitering christmas tree.It was a very christmasy tree.One fine day the christmas tree went to a shopping center he byed a peece of tinsle and a star to wear.A snowman was gellers, he ran to get him.... a star dropped out of the snowmans hand.But he got it back and picked it up and the snowman went to gail and the tree was so prity he became the king.

I know its just a snapshot but a round about level would be great, thanks

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monkeyfarm · 10/12/2012 11:04

Sorry I can't even copy a childs story Blush
That should read a star dropped out of the christmas trees hand!

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RubbishCrackerPuller · 10/12/2012 11:36

I have no idea, but I'm loving "gellers" it's jeenius Grin

Elibean · 10/12/2012 11:56

I have no idea either, but think its adorable - and 'gellous' especially.

I love deciphering LOs writing - though dd2's 'Are your elfs raping presence?' took me aback yesterday Grin

Elibean · 10/12/2012 11:57

Blush 'gellers'

I can't copy either!

FestiveWench · 10/12/2012 11:58

aah cute.

DS2 wrote a story about the "Prints and the Printses"

learnandsay · 10/12/2012 12:01

There are some levelled pieces of work with explanations of what's what on TES. www.tes.co.uk/teaching-resource/Examples-of-levelled-writing-L1-2-6034884/

RichTeas · 10/12/2012 22:36

Since you asked, I'll make a wild guess of 2C.

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