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is this bad grammar?

6 replies

branflake81 · 19/06/2008 11:25

I am writing up minutes at work and have written the sentence:

"XX advised against (......) as was suggested at last week's meeting"

as was suggested??

Is this right? It sounds very clumsy.

OP posts:
WendyWeber · 19/06/2008 11:26

I'd say "which was"

or "as suggested"

squeaver · 19/06/2008 11:26

Don't think you need the "was"

fryalot · 19/06/2008 11:26

sounds ok to me.

Perhaps "as had been suggested" may be slightly better, but I don't think what you have put is wrong.

Bink · 19/06/2008 11:30

It's just ambiguous - you can't tell whether what "was suggested" last week was (a) a proposal or (b) XX's lack of support for a proposal made the previous week.

I'd just spell it all out a bit more.

EffiePerine · 19/06/2008 11:32

.. a proposal that was suggested at last week's meeting?

MrsBadger · 19/06/2008 11:33

agree it's ambiguous - do you mean

  1. Bob advised against the security measures suggested at last week's meeting.
  1. As at last week's meeting, Bob advised against the security measures.
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