I'm proof reading my brother's Msc dissy at the last minute as he has only just worked out it needs doing (!) and I have come across this sentence.
In an environment where the military is increasingly reliant on civilian contractors to undertake core functions, there is little to suggest that it too is not effected by the same forces and drivers.
I want to change effected to affected, would I be right? I'm trying to read 20,000 words and make corrections to syntax, grammar, punctuation etc in 2 days, so I'm a tad scrambled at the moment. I'm also sorting out his apostrophes which are appalling. Thank God for Lynne Truss!
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scaryteacher · 22/04/2008 14:28
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