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help with this sentence please

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IamAporcupine · 25/01/2018 12:07

I am co-writing/editing a text and my colleague wrote:
The most common type of (say) fruit was a banana, followed by apples and kiwis.

I am not a native English speaker, so I might well be completely wrong, but there is something that does not sound right to me.
Maybe the 'a' banana?

Thanks

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JeanSeberg · 25/01/2018 12:10

The problem is banana is single; apples and kiwis are plural so the sentence is inconsistent.

"The most common type of fruit was banana, followed by apple and kiwi."

Ginandanything · 25/01/2018 12:11

It might read better as

The most common type of fruit is bananas, followed by apples and kiwis.

reallybadidea · 25/01/2018 12:13

I'm not convinced that you need the word 'type' at all. "The most common fruit was banana, followed by apple and kiwi" or "The most common fruits were bananas, followed by apples and kiwis".

IamAporcupine · 25/01/2018 12:14

Agree.
Thanks!

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GU24Mum · 25/01/2018 12:14

Agree that it's the singular/plural mix which is confusing. If you are referring to a type of fruit, then the fruit listed should be singular.

Imagine it in a description of popular names: you would write "The most popular girls' name this year are [for example] Sophie, Emily and Olivia".

IamAporcupine · 25/01/2018 12:15

In the original context I think we do need type though

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mumsiedarlingrevolta · 25/01/2018 12:16

what about variety instead of type?

IamAporcupine · 25/01/2018 12:18

No, variety does not work. Could use class instead of type I suppose.

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Northernknickers · 18/02/2018 07:22

'The banana' sounds better to me.

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