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Emergency grammar question. Come pedants one and all.

19 replies

cathyandclaire · 22/09/2014 18:13

Dd is about to 'pay and send' her personal statement and is having a last minute wobble about one sentence. It is..
I look forward to immersing myself in the unique combination of blaaaa and blaaa that subject A and subject B has to offer.
Or is it have to offer?
Does the has refer to 'the unique combination' singular or 'subject A and subject B' plural.
Everyone chez cathyandclaire disagrees and as subject A is English it really matters. Please help!

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LittleBearPad · 22/09/2014 18:15

I'd change it to

I look forward to immersing myself in the unique combination of blaaaa and blaaa offered by subject A and subject B.

Sidesteps grammar trauma

Kimaroo · 22/09/2014 18:16

Have sounds better. Whether it is right or not I don't know!

Grammar · 22/09/2014 18:18

Has

SerenaJoy · 22/09/2014 18:18

I don't know the answer so I'm watching intently.

I'm very disappointed in myself.

MrsHathaway · 22/09/2014 18:22

I am going to assume it's a joint honours subject, eg English and Business or English and Law. In that case it's a singular subject and takes "has". However, it's an ugly construction.

I recommend the passive: "the unique combination of blaaa and blaaa offered by A and B."

Minithemoocher · 22/09/2014 18:22

I was so sure I'd know, but it turns out I don't. Very disappointed in myself!

MrsHathaway · 22/09/2014 18:23

Or add "the study of" which is definitely and comfortably singular.

Chennai · 22/09/2014 18:23

It would be 'has' imo because it's referring to 'unique combination', which is singular. However, I would also sidestep and restructure as suggested!

MrsHathaway · 22/09/2014 18:24

Sorry, the subject of the clause is "subject A and subject B" but that doesn't make it plural.

Viviennemary · 22/09/2014 18:25

I'd say has because it goes with 'combination'.

Hakluyt · 22/09/2014 18:27

Has.

But I would rewrite qua littlebear

CoteDAzur · 22/09/2014 18:27

Have.

Substitute names in that sentence to see why:

... Looking forward to xxx that Jane and Joe have to offer.

cathyandclaire · 22/09/2014 18:33

Thanks so much, she has rewritten LittleBearPad's recommendation.
It has a few more characters but still squeaks in under the limit.

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holmessweetholmes · 22/09/2014 18:35

It is definitely 'have'. The verb 'to have' does not go with combination It goes with subject A and subject B and should therefore be plural. (languages teacher here, if that helps Smile).

holmessweetholmes · 22/09/2014 18:38

If it helps, reorganise the sentence just to see why the veeb goes with subject A and subject B, not with combination:

Subject A and subject B HAVE a great combination to offer. The 'combination' isn't 'having' the subjects - the subjects are 'having' the combination iyyswim.

PassTheCremeEggs · 22/09/2014 18:41

Definitely have. (Although in my view if subject a and subject b is a joint honours degree, they become a singular entity, so actually it could be has.

Helpful!

notjustamummythankyou · 22/09/2014 18:42

Yep, definitely 'have' not 'has'. You need the plural, as the verb relates to the subjects, not the combination.

I'd go with littlebear's version though. Smile

PassTheCremeEggs · 22/09/2014 18:42

(Should have properly closed my brackets to avoid my view being discarded on a pendants' thread)

notjustamummythankyou · 22/09/2014 18:44

Ah yes. Interesting point about it being a joint honours course, in which case I would also say 'has'!

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