Could someone please give me some advice on the grammar/punctuation of the following sentance?
'A charge of 20% of the daily rate for each of the days delay is requested.'
I'm not happy about 'days'. I feel there should be an apostrophe, but where? Or is the grammar wrong anyway, and I should rephrase it?
Now I look at it, I'm not happy about 'charge' either. You don't request a charge, do you? You make a charge, or request a payment. Hmmm...
Any advice gratefully received!