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Home in or hone in?

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MinnieMummy · 28/08/2010 14:37

I've now overthought this one and can't decide.

Current sentence is:

To home in on their barriers to learning, follow these steps.

Should it be:

To hone in on their barriers...

Either way 'in on' is ugly... Shall I just change it to:

'To identify their barriers'?

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AMumInScotland · 28/08/2010 14:46

"home in" is correct. But I agree it looks odd with the "in on" so probably would switch it to "identify" as well. HTH

spinspinsugar · 28/08/2010 14:47

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MinnieMummy · 28/08/2010 15:20

Thanks, have gone with 'identify' in the end.

OP posts:
clam · 01/09/2010 22:37

Don't you "hone" skills?

RustyBear · 01/09/2010 22:45

Hone means sharpen, so yes, you can hone skills, but it wouldn't fit in the OP's sentence.

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