I need advise about advertising/marketing/leaflets & how to write proper english?

[Katymac]

OK - I am advertising my childminding

I have chosen a nice stiff A$ pale green card, I am going to fold it in half to make a card shape

Then I am going to print stuff on it

I am printing up t-shirst for me, DH & DD to wear - no-one will look at me but DD is gorgeous & DH is a tall Jamaican - which is unusual in rural Norfolk

We are going to wander round the farmers market & village fete on Saturday hoping to give out these leaflet/booklet thingie

Does this have any chance of working?

Also if I print what I am putting in it will someone proof it form me & kinda convert it into english?

Believe in yourself!

The words of R. Kelly spring to mind!
'I belieeevee iiii can flyyyyy...'

I can't decide

I wibbling

sounds great KatyMac

Which one????

sorry! your one!

Nurturing, exploring & encouraging independence.

or

Exploration and discovery in a nurturing environment.

How about exploring & encouraging independence in a nurturing environment.

Exploration and discovery are pretty much the same thing in this context imho.
You're prob printing them now LOL
GOod luck xPM

Yes I'm printing them

I went with "Nurturing, exploring & encouraging independence"- it looked better imo

All done

Well I only printed off 69 in the end

I can't see me giving away a quarter of that number

I must have given out about 50 leaflets this morning

I was SO shocked

Lots of people approached me - rather than me approaching them

I'm having to print out more now

But only 1 this afternoon - isn't that odd?