This one has been bugging me ever since I finished it, but I can't quite put my finger on why!
I think it might be because, if I am honest, I couldn't tie together all the threads and I wanted to. I mean things like, why was Claire portrayed as a kleptomaniac, how exactly did Melody get Trudy's emerald, which pieces were actually in the China Collection which caused so much trouble? How did Edwina Storch manage to big up Claire to such an extent that the reader was meant to believe she was pivotal - why? because she was sleeping with Will Truesdale? Who knew the truth about Locket - did Victor Chen? (and why did she get such a daft name
?). What were the documents which Will distributed from Dominick's burial place in Macau? Answers on a postcard, please!
Also, like Ragwort, although the plot was tidied up, I still didn't feel as if the characters were sufficiently well-drawn to enable the reader to understand all their motivations, particularly Will. It was as if the author had a great idea in her head and wanted to suffuse the story with enigma, but did rather too good a job - leaving me slightly baffled and too much unrevealed. It didn't quite work.
Loved the setting though, looked at some of the history like many others on here and learned something! I was also intrigued by the device of Trudy and Claire both being Will's lovers, just 10 years apart, and the dual-timeline kept me interested.
So, although I enjoyed parts of this book and took quite a lot from it, it was not a resounding success. Either it needed more refinement/editing, or I am in the thick club with Ragwort
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PS - headintheclouds, do you want your book back?