The spaces between paras is a tricky one. DS deliberately wrote slightly long and I offered to help him precis after school comments came in and sat their chiselling off random adjectives, proudly coming in at 3997, and then of course found it was 7 lines too long.
I don't see how anyone fills their whole word count and keeps spaces between paras, and I will definitely advise DS2 to try to go for a three para structure when he comes to it - DS1 had about 6.
In the end he stuck two paras into one and chopped stuff out to keep the spacing so that the structure of the argument was clear, but I can totally see that the candidate with loads to say might say stuff it and cut out the empty lines.
Hard to know what to do for the best but probably not determining either way.
On Durham, there isn't really a pressing need for DS to do a separate one as he has squeezed in a last para (about 12% of word count only) on extra curricular stuff but I do wonder if it is worth just tweaking it to say “why I want to study history at Durham” rather than University and similar, so show willing. I do wonder how very hard it must be for people who do want to add extra-c stuff missing from their Oxbridge-focussed effort to cross out their carefully crafted course stuff.
Not sure what to advise him on this.