Hello, I am hoping to become a parent governor DS's school. I have to do a "mission statement" in 100 words to get people to vote for me rather than other candidates.
I am only allowed to submit one statement and I hoped I could get your feedback on two different ones I have prepared - do I come across well, or not? Would you vote for me on these statements or are they a turn-off?
I would appreciate your honest opinions, so please fire away, I can take it!
Statement 1:
"My son has just started at Year One, and as the school is going to play such a large part in our lives for the next few years, I want to get fully involved.
I don?t work now, so I am at the school gates every day and have time to dedicate. I can bring energy and fresh ideas. I am open, honest, friendly and straight-talking.
?Before Children?, I was a Broadcast Journalist at ITN News, where I learnt objectivity, and to ask searching, persistent, questions.
If elected I would listen to your views, and voice them clearly at meetings."
OR
Statement 2:
"I left my job as a Journalist at ITN News to have children. I swiftly found that two kids, a year apart, was much harder work than any job I?ve ever had, but now the kids are starting school here, I have more time to dedicate to other things again. As the school is going to play such a large part in our lives, I want to get fully involved, in the role of parent governor.
I am at the school gates every day and you will find me open, honest, and friendly. I will be persistent and straight-talking when taking your views to meetings. "
Thoughts, pretty please!