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Anyone like to discuss this poem? All welcome.

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anorak · 12/11/2004 08:56

Right to Life by Marge Piercy

A woman is not a pear tree
thrusting her fruit in mindless fecundity
into the world. Even pear trees bear
heavily one year and rest and grow the next.
An orchard gone wild drops few warm rotting
fruit in the grass but the trees stretch
high and wiry gifting the birds forty
feet up among inch long thorns
broken atavistically from the smooth wood.

A woman is not a basket you place
your buns in to keep them warm. Not a brood
hen you can slip duck eggs under.
Not a purse holding the coins of your
descendants till you spend them in wars.
Not a bank where your genes gather interest
and interesting mutations in the tainted rain.

You plant corn and you harvest
it to eat or sell. You put the lamb
in the pasture to fatten and haul it in
to butcher for chops. You slice
the mountain in two for a road and gouge
the high plains for coal and the waters
run muddy for miles and years.
Fish die but you do not call them yours
unless you planned to eat them.

Now you legislate mineral rights in a woman.
You lay claim to her pasture for grazing,
fields for growing babies like iceberg
lettuce. You value children so dearly
that none ever go hungry, none weep
with no one to tend them when mothers
work, none lack fresh fruit,
none chew lead or cough to death and your
foster homes are empty. Every noon the best
restaurants serve poor children steaks.

At this moment at nine o'clock a /partera/
is performing a table top abortion on an
unwed mother in Texas who can't get Medicaid
any longer. In five days she will die
of tetanus and her little daughter will cry
and be taken away. Next door a husband
and wife are sticking pins in the son
they did not want. They will explain
for hours how wicked he is,
how he wants discipline.

We are all born of woman. In the rose
of the womb we suckled our mother's blood
and every baby born has a right to love
like a seedling to sun. Every baby born
unloved, unwanted is a bill that will come
due in twenty years with interest, an anger
that must find a target, a pain that will
beget pain. A decade downstream a child
screams, a woman falls, a synagogue is torched,
a firing squad is summoned, a button
is pushed and the world burns.

I will choose what enters me, what becomes
flesh of my flesh. Without choice, no politics,
no ethics lives. I am not your cornfield,
not your uranium mine, not your calf
for fattening, not your cow for milking.
You may not use me as your factory.
Priests and legislators do not hold
shares in my womb or my mind.
This is my body. If I give it to you
I want it back. My life
is a non-negotiable demand.

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suetiggers · 01/12/2020 06:01

too many on here seem very ignorant about women's history in the U.S. and a few are proud of their ignorance...

FlamedToACrisp · 22/01/2021 01:10

I didn't like it, to be honest. I felt as if I ought to admire it, because it was a worthy topic, but I felt it was saying that only men ('you') despoil the earth selfishly and cruelly, while poor old women ('I') are just the innocent victims. That's far too simplistic.

I also thought it was two stanzas too long, very self-indulgent and not even valid - it's simply not true that the options are either have an abortion or be forced to bring up a baby you don't want. Adoptive parents would gladly love unwanted babies.

And the way the fifth stanza is phrased does not constitute poetry, in my opinion.

FlamedToACrisp · 22/01/2021 12:38

OMG this just came up on my Facebook feed!

Anyone like to discuss this poem?  All welcome.
Onlinedilema · 13/06/2021 07:23

Whilst I agree 100% with the sentiment I didn't like the poem. It's not well written in my opinion and it doesn't flow for me. That's my opinion. You can agree with the sentiment but find the delivery poor and that's how is describe this.
I am pro choice. Abortion should be a woman's right. I don't in any way feel queasy about abortion, abortion in any circumstances is fine by me.
Far too many unwanted children on the planet, but that doesn't mean I enjoyed this piece.

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