Poetry Workshop/Exercise 3

[Janstar]

Write a limerick about another mumsnetter!

I am very impressed janstar , very funny too.

Just killing 10 minutes, Melsy

There was a young lady called melsy
Whose hearing was giving her hellsy
She filled them with oil
She'd put on to boil
And now we don't all have to yellsy.

Here's another one for you posycal

There was a young lady called popsy
who woke up this morning all flopsy
She laid in her bed
just swinging the lead
as if she awaited autopsy.

Ha.Ha.Ha

These are very clever indeed! I'd lost track of the poetry writing exercises, but am glad that I peeked in to see what's happening.

There was a young woman named Janstar
Who, with her words, did emotionally scar
Those innocent folk
With her sarcastic joke
So watch out - 'cos I know where you are!!!

PMSL

Sorry, popsy, can't accept that. You have 2 too many syllables in the second line

There was a young woman named Janstar
Who, with words, did emotionally scar
Those innocent folk
With her sarcastic joke
So watch out - 'cos I know where you are!!!

better????

i thikn janstar ad i should only converse in rhyme!
that would be fun!

and maybe a little sad

What do you mean, drama queen?

talk in rhyme, philistine!

hmmmm
rhyME/philistINE

not a proper rhyme...hmmm

Here's one for my daughter:

There was a young girl called Katrina
Whose bedroom could not have been cleaner
She dusted and scrubbed
she polished and rubbed
As a cleaner, Katrina's a Zena.

Thanks Mum

Makes me smile.

Hope you are well and will meet up soon hopefully!!

Twinkie XXX