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Daddy's Day (you'll need the tissues for this one!)

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sparkler1 · 14/06/2006 20:14

I've been searching for a father's day poem for a craft that I have to do tomorrow at parent and toddler group. Amongst the hundred's of poems I found this. It put a lump in my throat. Sad

DADDY's DAY

Her hair up in a pony tail,
her favorite dress tied with a bow
Today was Daddy's Day at school,
and she couldn't wait to go

But her mommy tried to tell her,
that she probably should stay home
Why the kids might not understand,
if she went to school alone

But she was not afraid;
she knew just what to say
What to tell her classmates,
on this Daddy's Day

But still her mother worried,
for her to face this day alone
And that was why once again,
she tried to keep her daughter home

But the little girl went to school,
eager to tell them all
About a dad she never sees,
a dad who never calls

There were daddies along the wall in back,
for everyone to meet
Children squirming impatiently,
anxious in their seats

One by one the teacher called,
a student from the class
To introduce their daddy,
as seconds slowly passed

At last the teacher called her name,
every child turned to stare
Each of them were searching,
for a man who wasn't there

"Where's her daddy at?"
she heard a boy call out
"She probably doesn't have one,"
another student dared to shout

And from somewhere near the back,
she heard a daddy say
"Looks like another deadbeat dad,
too busy to waste his day."

The words did not offend her,
as she smiled at her friends
And looked back at her teacher,
who told her to begin

And with hands behind her back,
slowly she began to speak
And out from the mouth of a child,
came words incredibly unique

"My Daddy couldn't be here,
because he lives so far away
But I know he wishes he could
be with me on this day

And though you cannot meet him,
I wanted you to know
All about my daddy,
and how much he loves me so

He loved to tell me stories,
he taught me to ride my bike
He surprised me with pink roses,
and taught me to fly a kite

We used to share fudge sundaes,
and ice cream in a cone
And though you cannot see him,
I'm not standing all alone

'Cause my daddy's always with me,
even though we are apart
I know because he told me,
he'll forever be here in my heart"

With that her little hand reached up,
and lay across her chest
Feeling her own heartbeat,
beneath her favorite dress

And from somewhere in the crowd of dads,
her mother stood in tears
Proudly watching her daughter,
who was wise beyond her years

For she stood up for the love
of a man not in her life
Doing what was best for her,
doing what was right

And when she dropped her hand back down,
staring straight into the crowd
She finished with a voice so soft,
but its message clear and loud

"I love my daddy very much,
he's my shining star,
And if he could he'd be here,
but heaven's just too far,

But sometimes when I close my eyes,
it's like he never went away."
And then she closed her eyes,
and saw him there that day

And to her mother's amazement,
she witnessed with surprise
A room full of daddies and children,
all starting to close their eyes

Who knows what they saw before them,
who knows what they felt inside
Perhaps for merely a second,
they saw him at her side.

"I know you're with me Daddy,"
to the silence she called out
And what happened next made believers,
of those once filled with doubt

Not one in that room could explain it,
for each of their eyes had been closed
But there placed on her desktop,
was a beautiful fragrant pink rose

And a child was blessed, if only a moment, by the
love of her shining bright star
And given the gift of believing,
that heaven is never too far.

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WelshBoris · 14/06/2006 20:18

fecking hell sparkler im in tears here

sparkler1 · 14/06/2006 20:19

It's so sad isn't it. Sad and lovely all at the same time. Smile

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crazydazy · 14/06/2006 20:25

Yes I have seen that before, its lovely but makes you feel all cold all over.

EvesMama · 14/06/2006 20:25

god im sobbing..thats so ..i dont knowSad

nicnack2 · 14/06/2006 20:28

awwwwww. sniff sniff.

LadyTambaOfTambaTown · 14/06/2006 20:30

Thats actually made me cry

tenalady · 14/06/2006 20:33

I cant see the screen for tears rolling down my cheeks. oh flaming heck Sad

sparkler1 · 14/06/2006 20:34

sorry guys - I'm sat hear doing the same. It was too beautiful not to share.

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sparkler1 · 14/06/2006 20:34

here

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Feistybird · 14/06/2006 20:40

Oh come on! Slap yerselves about a bit.

No offence Sparkler, but it's schmaltzy mush.

Twinkie1 · 14/06/2006 20:44

What a load of parp!!!

sparkler1 · 14/06/2006 20:45

AW! Don't be so hard. This poem could be so true to many children out there.

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WideWebWitch · 14/06/2006 20:47

sorry, I think it's awful!

sparkler1 · 14/06/2006 20:49

Each to their own. I loved it.

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tenalady · 14/06/2006 20:58

In what way awful WWW?

jamese · 15/06/2006 14:35

Another one with tears rolling down my cheeks. I read it out aloud and I think that made it worse, cause once I knew what was coming my voice began to croak...

I have lost my dad, although at the age of 34 but not sure if I would have cried if I didn't have that experience so to speak.

What a lovely poem, one of the best I have ever seen about losing parents etc.

NomDePlume · 15/06/2006 14:39

It is horribly cheesy, sorry sparkler...

Whizzz · 15/06/2006 14:57

Filled up here too....sniff

CountessDracula · 15/06/2006 15:23
sparkler1 · 15/06/2006 15:30

It's not that bad Grin

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sparkler1 · 15/06/2006 15:31

I thought it had a clever twist

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motherinferior · 15/06/2006 15:31
sparkler1 · 15/06/2006 15:35

lol!

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sparkler1 · 15/06/2006 15:36

You guys with the projectile vomitting are probably the ones working through the kleenez the most and not wanting to admit to it. Smile

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PPH · 15/06/2006 16:39

what pap!