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Inspiration after submitting!!!!

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GhostImposter · 23/05/2024 09:51

Aargh!!! I recently submitted the opening chapters of the novel I'm editing to a number of competitions. Cheshire, Bath, First Novel etc as well as for a mentorship opportunity and in an application for Arts Council funding. I'd gotten some really positive feedback on the chapters, including from a fantastic, award winning writer, but something about them wasn't quite sitting right with me. I had the vaguest of ideas about what was wrong but no matter how I tried I couldn't figure it out enough to get them to be how I wanted.

A lot of people who've read my work, including that writer, have told me I'm way too hard on my writing and that I'm just too close to the work to see how good it is. But I kept on going back to those chapters and trying to tweak them. To the point that it was holding me back from moving forward with the novel. So yesterday I decided to submit to everything outstanding that I wanted to submit to, get them out of the way so I could forget about them and move on. (At least until I was ready for my next draft.)

So I did my last tweak and submitted. Then I even spent a couple of hours on a different short writing project and submitted that. And got on with editing the next chapter of my novel. I was finally able to get back into and wrote away, pulling some small sections out that would be more suitable in a later chapter and polishing up the rest. I was pretty worn out but also quite satisfied by the time I had to stop.

Last night at 4am, I woke up to pee. Then got back into bed and every single thing I feel is wrong in my opening chapters hit me with great clarity. For the next 3 hours I lay there, as idea after idea about how to fix them hit me. And not the half asleep ideas you think you have sometimes before you get up and realise it was all nonsense. They are solid ideas for each chapter and I'm pretty excited and pretty pissed off.

I've decided to just make notes and plough on forward rather than going back. Which is what I should be doing now instead of posting this. But aaarrrggghhh! It's so damn frustrating to feel like I've wasted all my competition entries.

(On the other hand, at least now I've created an insurance policy for my ego if I don't l longlist.)

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PilgrimQuill · 25/05/2024 11:17

To GhostImposter: It's not that you are being too close to your work, nor that you are being too hard on yourself. I think the problem is possibly a failure to recognise that writing is an art form. Like all art, you pour yourself into it with the best skills of your craft, then step back - and realise that it is your next one that is going to be your best.

Art is a communication process - once you have expressed your ideas, it is for others to pick up on them, and how thy receive them is up to them. I bet Mona Lisa wasn't smiling like that at the end of the sit, but instead of painting the fedup look Leonardo immortalised her as he first saw her.

You sound like a good writer who knows their craft and is determined to perform it well. But a finished work is just that. Let it go. Your next one is going to be the one that shakes the world... Trust me - I used to teach creative writing, back in the day. This agonising over what is complete is common amongst excellent writers - but see it for what it is and create onwards.
Hope you get placed in all the competitions you've entered.

NewWriter · 26/05/2024 10:38

What wonderful advice @PilgrimQuill , thank you for sharing

TiroirSousLeMiroir · 28/05/2024 11:39

It sounds fascinating that you had a 4am moment of clarity! Divine inspiration perhaps!

I can't wait to read it someday so I do hope you have success with it.

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