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First Chapter

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cornishcrusader · 20/03/2023 14:36

Having finally finished my novel I am now on the editing stage. However my main issue is the first chapter, which seems to break every rule in the book. I know it's more telling than showing, I know not much happens and yes exposition. It isn't really a good example of the rest of the novel where things DO happen. Yet however I try I cannot move it to later, or spread the information it contains elsewhere. Or even delete. If I am honest, I am actually rather fond of it... but I suspect readers won't be. I wondered if anyone would be prepared to read it for me (it's 2000 words) and be honest enough to tell me how awful or boring it is, in the hope I will be convinced to somehow let it go even if it is the chapter that is closest to my heart. I am very happy to return the favour by reading anyone else's work. Many thanks in advance.

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monsteramunch · 21/03/2023 00:11

Feel free to PM me to have a look through it, I would be very happy to.

Timmysbagel · 21/03/2023 00:16

I’d be happy to read it and give you my honest opinion!

cornishcrusader · 21/03/2023 09:50

monsteramunch · 21/03/2023 00:11

Feel free to PM me to have a look through it, I would be very happy to.

Thank you so much monsteramunch. I will PM you.

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cornishcrusader · 21/03/2023 09:51

Timmysbagel · 21/03/2023 00:16

I’d be happy to read it and give you my honest opinion!

I will PM you Timmysbagel and thank you so much.

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WarriorsComeOutToPlayay · 22/03/2023 20:37

I’ll happily read it OP

cornishcrusader · 23/03/2023 19:46

WarriorsComeOutToPlayay · 22/03/2023 20:37

I’ll happily read it OP

Thank you so much, WarriorsComeOutToPlay. I will message you.

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YukoandHiro · 23/03/2023 19:47

Just delete it.

cornishcrusader · 23/03/2023 20:05

YukoandHiro · 23/03/2023 19:47

Just delete it.

Thank you for your advice, YukoandHiro - though I don't think you have read it, have you?

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ElsieT23 · 24/03/2023 09:44

I'm happy to read if you want a 4th opinion 😀

cornishcrusader · 24/03/2023 12:08

ElsieT23 · 24/03/2023 09:44

I'm happy to read if you want a 4th opinion 😀

I would really appreciate your opinion, ElsieT23 - thank you so much. I will PM you.

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