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Do you have to kill a character off once you have decided to?

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Nousernameforme · 10/11/2020 11:55

I'm taking the opportunity of the 2nd lockdown to get my first draft of something i've been working on for months.
As I was writing this character popped up and her existence made a lot of sense and she has fitted right in and will move the plot along nicely. But I think she has to die I'm not exactly how sure the story is going to end but I'm pretty sure she is going to be killed and I am strangely upset by this. She's only existed for the last 2.5k words and I'm sat here getting quite teary at the thought. I am not an emotional person at all but i am thinking had anyone thought they would have to kill a character off only for it to make more sense for them to live in the end. Or do I risk ruining the flow of writing if I get stuck trying to find a work around so she can survive.

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WeetabixComesAtAPrice · 10/11/2020 12:30

Hmm. If you feel emotional about killing her, that bodes well for your writing as it indicates she's a convincing character in whom you're emotionally invested - so in theory her death will have an emotional impact on your readers, which is exactly what you want.

You don't say what genre your book is - if it's plot driven, you need to think about which outcome is best for your plot, if it's character-driven, can your victim add more to the story by continuing to live?

'Finding a workaround' doesn't sound ideal - when you make a change to your plot it should feel as though you're finding the right path, the one that makes sense, rather than contriving something.

The only time I have really regretted killing a character was when writing a series. It was absolutely right for her to die at the end of book one, but I found myself missing her in later books because I couldn't quite find a substitute for her.

As this is only your first draft, I think you would be safe to stay on track to kill her unless and until you find a better way for her to live - which you might do by the time you reach subsequent drafts.

(We writers sound like such psychopaths when we calmly discuss whether to kill people or not Grin )

Nousernameforme · 10/11/2020 12:47

It's fantasy possible YA and as you say at the moment at least It feels like she has to die I'm just going to continue with what comes out of my head and not focus too much on the ending. She is completely likable though i'm going to be heartbroken.

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WeetabixComesAtAPrice · 10/11/2020 12:52

That sounds like the right way to go with your first draft. You might end up making significant changes between the first and second draft, so you don't have to view her death as set in stone at this early stage. It may be possible in a future draft to give her a larger role in the book before you kill her so you can spend more time with her.

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