Meet the Other Phone. Child-safe in minutes.

Meet the Other Phone.
Child-safe in minutes.

Buy now

Please or to access all these features

Creative writing

Whether you enjoy writing sci-fi, fantasy or fiction, join our Creative Writing forum to meet others who love to write.

First chapter

34 replies

yourhistory · 21/05/2019 10:52

I know the first three chapters are all important and I am wondering what people think about introducing the 4 major characters in the first chapter, so having a bit about the background of each one? I am just not sure whether this would go against standard structure of a novel, and would be too bitty for a reader to absorb. The whole book is finished, so it wouldn't be hard to move things around. There is one main protagonist in the book, with 3 other major characters who impact hugely on the story, who do not know each other.

Thank you!

OP posts:
yourhistory · 21/05/2019 13:52

hollow It is a really unusual thing, as in not often covered in books I don't think, not along the lines of friend sleeping with husband, so I couldn't say exactly. In summary, the drama is about someone trying to destroy another person's life though, and the MC side steps it and chooses love. What you have said already is really helpful - the bit about story streams is what I was thinking too hence the thread. And as you say, it takes time to get to know a character. Is there anything about what I have said that is appealing, and is it your genre?

OP posts:
HollowTalk · 21/05/2019 13:58

My writing genre is psychological suspense but I read all sorts.

I'm not sure how you've written it but if someone was destroying another person's life, I'd want to see that happening in real time, being played out in front of me, and to feel the impact of that from the MC's POV, from the very first suspicion to the final threat. I'd expect tension and suspense.

I'd then expect some sort of climactic scene towards the end where the MC realises what's happening and/or deals with what's happening.

HollowTalk · 21/05/2019 14:01

I've just sent you a PM.

Baskerville · 21/05/2019 14:06

No, I write literary fiction, hardly ever read crime, and have never considered writing it. Grin

The novel I've just finished is a slow-burning 'historical' novel about the relationship between two real people, but I began it with a short dramatic scene of the final time they see one another, and the protagonist chasing her ex-lover's car in the snow -- it wouldn't be immediate enough if the opening scene was my main character telling her friend afterwards about how she'd chased his car in the snow.

I'm not sure what you mean by 'story streams'? How does your first chapter break down in scenes?

yourhistory · 21/05/2019 14:17

hollow I have replied !

basker I am curious now as to why you have mentioned two books with murders...!! I explained the story streams in the second para of my post at 12:23 - would be very interested to know what you think though I now have a plan how to introduce them differently.

Is literary fiction just something with literary merit ie great writing? I had read on here that literary fiction had to so arty and obscure it had no plot...

OP posts:
thegreatcrestednewt · 21/05/2019 14:36

So you've had it edited? What kind of editing? If developmental editing, the editor should have flagged up any 'bigger picture' problems with the text.

yourhistory · 21/05/2019 14:43

greatcrested i mean I have gone through and picked up errors and inconsistencies, not that anyone else has seen it.

OP posts:
Baskerville · 21/05/2019 14:56

Well, both those novels I mentioned (which are both brilliant in very different ways, if you haven't read them) are literary fiction, rather than 'crime novels' even though they're about murders.

Literary fiction is difficult to define apart from by saying 'not genre fiction' (though of course there are lots of boundary-blurring novels).

Literary novels are often less plot-driven, less adherent to the usual 'formula' of a detective /mystery/romance/sci-fi novel, more concerned with the prose. The characters may be far more important than the plot. I mean, those are gross generalisations, obviously.

Think of a police procedural like the Inspector Morse series (murder, investigation, detective finally solving the crime -- plot-based, keeping the reader guessing about the murderer's identity, red herrings, hopefully surprising you with the climax).

Then think of a literary novel I've just finished, Solar Bones by Mike McCormack, which I was talking about on another thread. It's experimental in its style (the entire novel is written in one single sentence) and is the stream of consciousness of a dead man sitting at a table thinking about his life. There's no particular plottiness -- he's just thinking about his wife and children and his past. It's beautiful, and won a major award, but his agent won't have sold it on the basis of it being 'high-concept' or 'commercial'! Grin

yourhistory · 22/05/2019 17:43

Sorry I was slow to reply, real life got in the way, with broken violin bows and various other dramas to sort out with dc. What you have said and all three books you referred to all sounds very interesting, thank you.

Because of the blurred boundaries I suppose that it is hard for both writers and agents sometimes to decide that a book should be considered literary, not commercial. You said that the formulaic approach might fall away if something is literary, but still it seems the agents are still looking for the formulaic, the dramatic start, for example. Because that sells? Yet in fact if you look at the stats literary sells better at the moment?

Thanks for explaining about literary vs other it is really helpful.

OP posts:
New posts on this thread. Refresh page